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Is Fluttershy secretly being into tentacles a running gag from somewhere I missed? I've seen it in more than one story. (I've also seen her into weirder stuff, usually followed by "It's always the quiet ones.")
to
cube
done
bobbed
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Thank you for the spellchecking. I am baffled why you got a -1 for spellchecking.
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I'm almost positive that it is exactly that reason, "Always the quiet ones".
Well, that and Fluttershy is besties with Discord.
inhaling deep - inhaling deeply
She drew on - She drew in
second the last - second to lastshe ran a tongue - she ran her tongue
She could the shafts - She could feel the shafts
the cub to her teats - the cube to her teatsfought in her throat - caught in her throat
spraying her womb down in that - spraying her womb down with its
one last great loud - one last great load
It had some something - It had done somethingwith amazingly flexibility - with amazing flexibility
about six inches in length, thick and dribbling milk along its length - about six inches long, thick and dribbling milk along its length
wove and bob - wove and bobbedin its fertile offering - with its fertile offering
Wow...
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Oh my, clop is not good for my battle against typos. Thank you, sir.
This us a commision or patreon story?
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Yes
drooping flash - drooping flesh
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No one likes you, Flash.
I feel sure that there is at leat one more chapter of Tree Hugger's tale to be told before moving on to the next
victimsubject of the box's attentions.that pressure had been - the pressure had been
Tree Hugger smiled at the familiar ponies. - Tree Hugger smiled at the familiar pony.
-and-
You used the same 'like a lost foal' simile twice in close proximity, not really a typo but a minor style challenge.
I wonder if it created the desire or if it just amplified something that was already in her.
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Fix fix fix. There's so many things wrong with this scene, let typos not be one of them.
I think it would be interesting to see how somepony else...
How about expansion for Dash?
Hummm...I'm sort of down for either...but I'd also be down for maybe seeing the...evolution of one or more ponies using the cube over time to become something truly and utterly depraved, perhaps even without them noticing. Then again I'm a real sucker for corruption.
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This may be the right story for you. Tree Hugger is becoming something else, and is dragging down the ponies of the town with her. Come, kneel before mother and she will take care of you.
where it had came from - where it had come from
Not sure what this means. Feels like there's a word or part of the previous conversation missing.
crashed down on his bed - crashed down onto his bed
It was that cube. - It was the cube.
when he flopped - when he'd flopped
It was bright blue flower - It was a bright blue flower
shaken free some of it - shaken some of it free
shrink and round - shrink and round out
everying a mare - everything a mare
at least for a moment. - at least for the moment.
but it was there, at all. - but it was there, at all.
around his midsections - around his midsection
why wouldn't he be mounted at some point. - why wouldn't he be mounted at some point?
Hmmm... which stallion would even be up to the task of providing Princess Big Mcintosh with a little relief. Trouble Shoes? Maybe a pegasus could hover... Maybe both with the Princess at the filling in a Big McIntosh sandwich...
Hmmm...
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Oh dear, all fixed up. Many thanks, loyal reader.
🎶 Princess Big Mac! 🎶
I think the next chapter should be big mack mothering the too and being over protective.
Could be funny and kinkey
Follow big Mac for a while please
I'd say it's time to move on to somepony else. Big Mac has found his/her bliss; who's next?
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No suggestions on who?
8401378 I'm stricken with option paralysis; the lack of limits on who we could pick (let alone what would happen) have made it extremely difficult for me to choose a particular individual.
8401378 After giving it some more thought, I know who I'd like to see next: Zecora!
Go to a new pony.
Like Spoiled becoming a whore.
Zecora's second line being a reply to Mac's reply brings up questions on how and why she rhymes. Is destiny involved? Was Mac's reply predictable? Did she have contingencies planned? Was she going to improvise? Will these questions ever be answered?
Voting... Hm... Not Pinkie yet, since I feel she should take the box rather than having it appear when* she gets it, and lifting it off Zecora doesn't seem right. Zecora Saves Everyone shouldn't be the main plot, but it may be good to give it a paragraph or two at the end of each future chapter. Of the options listed... Vinyl? Yeah, I'm going to go with #5.
*Not if. This seems pretty inevitable.
#5
#6
trotted (also that gives you a double rhyme)
Votes: #1, #2.
Also, and I recommend this to anyone who tries to write Zecora: http://www.writerhymes.com
I vote for either #2 or #5.
I wouldn't mind seeing how #3 would go especially if it means what I hope it does
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Now I have to ask what you mean. You forced this!
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Kind of a personal fascination/fetish, but when I think of the Cakes "spicing things up" I get to thinking of them swapping bits and Cup Cake being the one to fill Carrot. >.<
DO THEM ALL!!!!!!!!
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Not in one chapter I won't. :p
#1
#1
5
5
1
2,3,6
6
Very nice chapter! I quite liked that you tagged this with [rhyming] to warn people!
Not to mention that entire first paragraph.
So Zecora managed to get away with her virtue intact...we can't have that now, can we?
But on the other hoof, we don't need to follow her exploits right now. So I say option #6.
... 3, 6.
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It's a serious warning to any good chapter with Zecora in it, bless her striped heart. I do adore her, rhymes and all. Writing them is always a fun challenge.
#666
I am liking this story so far, please keep up the interesting work.
as for the poll. I vote for : #1, #2, #4 and #5.
Hmm. The email said the chapter title was 'Drop the Beat'.
There really needs to be a confirmation on that publish button.
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You get an email when I update?