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I liked it. I will say it needs the sad tag or changing complete to incomplete and adding another chapter. I never like getting an unpleasant surprise, even a mild one like that. I dunno. Maybe it hit a little hard for me as I've been in the same shoes as RD before, so it called up a little more emotion than was normally applicable.
Still thumbs upped, and still a good story though.
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Kewl.
Well I liked it, nothing wrong with an Appledash story, curious to see who Applejack is going to dance with though, I can't help but feel that the next chapter will not end well for him. There is going to be a next chapter right?
damn you, this could've made for an awesome AppleDash story but you just had to tag this complete huh?
where can i find part 2 ? ^^ good read
Somepony doesn't have to be gullible to be successfully guilt-tripped. (Although in this specific case, it helped.)
Still, Dash at her most opportunistic is always worth a read, and this was handled nicely.
Cool. Can't wait for the next chapter
Wait. Complete?
Dammit.
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Agreed, really needs a 'sad' tag.
Y'know I really didn't mean for it to be sad.
Though the tag has been added.
If I can think of a happier ending that doesn't just seem tagged on then I'll update.
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*cough* update *cough*
More please. Poor rainbow she is totally not seeing the signs, *cough* AJ lie *cough*
Still waiting for you to write more
[anticipation intensifies]
Aww right in the feels... I love it! I hope you plan to write more soon!
I really enjoyed reading this, but now I hate myself for reading something that clearly said incomplete and was uploaded in 2012