Two worlds, one spell gone wrong, but not from the source that most would think. A simple artifact of great power pulling a certain pony across the planes to another world. One similar to her own yet also different in so many ways.
(this is a Fairy Tail crossover for those who don't know. And it will take place before the time skip, but after a certain point. We'll say probably a bit after the whole Edolas thing but a while before the S-Class examinations, after all, who says there cant be some fun adventures that the manga never showed us)
(character tags to be added as they appear)
New cover art courtesy of ponyKillerx of deviantart. Kudos to them for letting me use it http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/068/2/c/twilight_by_ponykillerx-d4kd8wj.png
Woah Woah Woah what?!?! 10/31/15 featured?! okay so apparently they decided "hey, guy came back after three years and decided to update, let's feature for teh lolz" Seriously though? I didn't deserve that but thank you fimfiction staff.
Excellent. I think you stumbled a bit at the beginning, but that straightened out nicely.
Can I have that picture? O.O
931328 lol I just googled it so idk who the original artist is, but feel free to use it.
You deserve a Derpy and a Fluttershy!!
Oops... I gave you two of both!!
ok, this is even better than i could have hoped for, and as for what you said in the description, there are ALWAYS plots the manga never covers.
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i dont think he minds
932659 no I do not mind.....though i had to stop myself from using the meme.
and now folks at a bit of an impasse. I can either continue the story onward, giving the fairy tail gang and twilight some wacky and possibly epic adventures, or I can leave it at two chapters and let your imaginations come up with ideas. I have a few possible ideas that I could do, but seeing as how this fic was actually a little popular right off the bat, I thought I'd get some reader opinion.
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I'd rather you go with the first idea, after all, Its not like I'm the writer.
That and I like where this is going.
It got my fave, please keep going. Besides, you haven't gotten any dislikes yet and that's a very good thing.
the Pegasus in question being Rainbow Dash (shocker I know),
that (shocker I know) seems unnecessary and should be removed, it kinda disrupts the flow of reading.
This also applies to the other short parts in brackets.
"aye!" twilight jumped a bit. "it can speak? Fascinating." happy smiled. both names should be capitalized.
You don't want that right?
934967 I agree with the previous opinions. Please continue, or you'll make Fluttershy cry.
935844>>946700>>948163 well the readers have spoken and my muse hit me with the idea. Expect another chapter within the next few days
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YES! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
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yay
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Awesome story continued! I'll have to read all of it when I get back from vacation.
This part isn't what it should be." levy said with a smile, -> Levy
"magic is not always clear and simple. If I was brought here then there's no helping it." -> Again with the capitalization; Magic
"You all consider me a friend?" At this gray gave a smile. "of course. If you're one of Lucy's spirits technically, then you're a friend of ours. -> Gray; Of course
Twilight smiled as she sat down at her desk, picking up a quill and piece of parchment with her magic, spreading out the parchment before narrating her letter as the quill began moving.
In Canterlot Castle, Princess Celestia sat in her private chambers, gently sipping a cup of tea as she prepared herself to lower the sun the last bit to make way for her sister to raise the moon. As she finished her cup, a small burst of flame appeared in front of her face. She smiled as she saw the seal on the scroll, unrolling it and reading the latest message from her protogè and her friends. -> You should put something between those two paragraphs, just to clarify that there's a break in the narrative.
So next chapte expect either some wacky fun, or magic face-offs of epic proportions. -> chapter
I liked this chapter, as well as the story so far. A nice little read for an evening
let the adventures BEGIN!
When I first saw this story I was quite interested. I didn't finish the series but I watched a lot of it and so far it's pretty good. I liked the old picture better though, even if the new one fits the story better.
The way shit will go down... it will be excelent.
WHOO NEW CHAPTER!
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you may continue living now
Ok so I lied a bit, no second chapter tonight, but it will be out this week. I just have to wake up for an early shift for work in a while and need SOME sleep at least.
The chapter was good, I only noticed two things.
First, "Wasn't my fault Twilight. The princess sent you a latter." I think you meant letter.
Second, it would be nice if you separated the AN from the story, maybe a line like this
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would work.
I spy an obvious reference.
1179106 reference?
where?
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To "The hourglass always stays"
...
Andiamo?
oh i thought you meant somewhere in the actual story
I literally said in the author note i picked that up from "The hourglass always stays"
I need another chapter!
A friend of mine has been bugging me to watch Fairy Tale for a while, and so I just started this past weekend... and got kinda hooked... Being a brony that LOVES fanfics... especially a good crossover... you sir make me dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png Keep up the good work dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Capitalize the i.
Yes a new chapter. Awesome!!!!
Yay! Can't wait til a fight breaks out.
"Lucy gavr a sigh and turned to Twilight." Should be "gave" not "gavr"
YAY IT IS ALIVE!!!!! Moustaches for you!!
She said with a smile. 9-> no 9 there.
Well, let's see where you'll take us.
Oh goodie! Some Fairy Tail antics
I LIKE FAIRY TAIL. I LIKE PONIES. I LIKE FAIRY TAIL PONIES. I LIKE AUTHORS OF FAIRY TAIL PONIES. I LIKE YOU.
Very good.
good fic, dam shame ITS DEAD GRAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Awesome, love Fairy Tail, really good story
can you wirte next chapter please?
3754274 shhhh dont tell the others....but a new chapter may be secretly in the works to revive this.
this story gets beter with each ch i am lol at most ch. this story story is alsome and i cant wait to read more
also i look forward to more storys you make so than thin best of luck in both fimfiction and the real world
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when you stard making chapter now?
MOAR!!!!
um please
i think the only thing i have to complain about is the dialogue. there should be a space between when someone starts talking, and when they are responded to.
Okay, this story has my complete attention, you've managed to throw away all of the cliches used in other cross over fan fics AND you used an in universe reason for it
Clever... I'm kinda jealous you had the idea first.
Keep up the good work thanks
Fairy Tale is best anime
MOUSESTACES !
