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Nightmare Moon Is The Best Pony781 stories ·1,931 members

The Nightmare Children of the Night

Luna, for as long as she can remember, has always had to wake the night guard's. Doing so gives her little time to do her job. It's time to find another way.

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Thatsnoreason

Thatsnoreason #1 · Aug 8th, 2017 · 2 · · Nightmare's new family ·

Hmm...
If I may ask why the changes from seemingly light-hearted comedy into take-foals-and-stab-their-parent-in-the-chest?

JackRipper

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JackRipper #2 · Aug 8th, 2017 · 2 · · Nightmare's new family ·

Might want to capitalize the title.

Armyidiot

Armyidiot #3 · Aug 8th, 2017 · 3 · 1 · A Royal problem ·

I find this rather interesting. A few small grammar mistakes, and a couple poorly phrased sentences, but otherwise, exceptionally well written.

RainbowSparkle3

RainbowSparkle3 #4 · Aug 8th, 2017 · 1 · · A Royal problem ·

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I agree, but also, some of the tags don't really fit...still, nice job.

Micro-song

Micro-song #5 · Aug 8th, 2017 · 1 · · Nightmare's new family ·

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That's a good question

I dunno? I just wrote it the way it flows in my head. Because it was Luna, she's caring and stuff. But then, she became nightmare Moon, so she doesn't care that much.