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Inspired by the events from "Castle Sweet Castle"
Twilight Sparkle has been acting strange as of late, doing everything she can to avoid spending time in her castle. It can't be over the fact she lost her old home? Right? To her, the idea seems illogical! There must be another reason!
Right?
Edited by tommal, Elika Deerling, and link4
This entire story was inspired by the video "La Da Dee" by TheeLinker - Song: "La Da Dee" by Cody Simpson
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A touching story about loss and finding something new. It's so...
Aww, sweet, short story. Also, is this taking place in Season 7?
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It's kinda-sorta an alt. to Castle Sweet Castle (Season 5).
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But it mentions Flurry Heart.
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Oops.
* Fixed *
Can someone explain the sudden rush of downvotes? I'm a little bit confused here.
I'm not mad, but want to know in order to better myself.
I'm not crying....nope not at all
It's just...ummm....ONIONS yeah that's what it is,there's a ghost cutting onions in my room
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Been wondering about that too, i would say this is a very neat, touching and well written story.
My best guess is that maybe some people didn't like how twilight was in denial about liking and missing golden oak, since that is somewhat out of character? I don't know though.
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That's what me and another user narrowed it down to. It seems like Twilight's denial was OOC, but in reality I don't quite think so. Twilight has far too often, in episodes like Lesson Zero & Castle Sweet Castle, hid away or masked her true thoughts and feelings over issues that are more personal to her, such as loosing the Golden Oak. So for her to come out and deny her feelings at first, before admitting to them later, does seem realistic.
Also, you can't really measure the tone of which I wrote it. There is no hate of anger within it, just Twilight doing what she can to make up excuses which hold no weight.
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First i would like to clarify that i don't agree with the dislikes and criticism, i quite enjoyed the story
But now i can't help but fall into discussion, sorry, i just love to argue (what would a cutie mark for arguing even look like ?)...
Twilight often hides her true feelings, yeah. However in this story she tries to deny that she even liked golden oak in the first place, and that kinda goes against her behaviour.
Hiding and denying/lying are two very different things.
Regarding the tone, yeah that can be mistaken by readers which probably led to some of the dislikes. I got that there is no anger in it, but maybe that's because we just wrote a story that basically consists of twilight's inner emotions and thoughts together.
I could see others mistake the emotions presented for actual anger or something of the sort.
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But won't you have to lie in order to hide something?
Anyways, would it seem more like Twilight is she avoids the subject vs. lying about how she feels?
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Well yeah, but a different kind of lie.
Her hiding that she misses golden oak would be something like:
No i don't miss golden oak. ( i know i know, very creative).
What was done in this story was more like :
No i don't miss golden oak , that place was terrible.
( once again just for clarification, i personally don't find anything wrong with this take, just trying to inquire the reasoning for the dislikes.)
Well that's kinda what happened in the episode. By avoiding the castle she was avoiding her conflict. Once her friends called her out on it she pretty much spilled the beans.
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Interesting read. I'll keep that in mind for future use.
Wonderful story.
That was a good story.