• Member Since 3rd Jun, 2012
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Johnjohns


Sand Sucks

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When Twilight Sparkle falls to a mysterious illnesss, it becomes apparent that a certain, yellow pegasus holds the key to saving Twilight's life. Fluttershy however, has no knowledge of how to help her friend, and she is quickly running out of time.


Special thanks to by Ventious for the awsome cover art. You should go check out his other art, over on his deviantART page. My story would not be complete, were it not for him. So go tell him how much you love him, he deserves it. :)

Links:

http://ventious.deviantart.com/ <-------- You can find Ventious here.

http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Dreken <------- You may also find Dreken here.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 13 )

Great story, it was fun pre-reading this. Can wait for more stories!

This story... I don't know what.

I like it. Lemme say that much. I really like it, it's well-written and flows well. I'm also really confused and I think I missed something that should have cued me for the ending, because it caught me by complete surprise. I feel like I missed some subtle hint somewhere that would explain it all. Regardless, the fact that it's a story that makes me want to reread it is a "well done", as most I can just read and drop.

I still feel stupid for not seeing that coming...

OOOOH ME LIKE DIS!:coolphoto:
(Finaly have a reason to use that emoticon...)

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I am really glad that you liked it! There were multiple hints to the ending in the story, however they were quite subtle indeed. If I hadn't written the story, I probly would have missed then myself. Thanks for the favorite, they really help newbie authors, such as myself, out.

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So glad that you liked it that much, It really means a lot to me. Also, thanks for being my third follower. Cant wait to show you what's next!

Pinkie Pie :pinkiecrazy: do not strangle the janitor in front of your boss. :facehoof:

Five bits,” Zecora

Twilight opened up her saddle bag, and rummaged around for six coins,

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Derp. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix that now. Thanks for the favorite by the way!

She see's the light.....:trixieshiftright:( I'm out of jokes n' stuff)

I honestly consciously don't understand the ending.
But my heart does.

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Wow. I thought that people were done reading this piece of crap story. How long has this been on your "Read Later?"

2068096 I don't put stuff on my read later, I open them in a new tab, and read them, or I download them to read on my own convenience.

Edit: as it stands, I have 108 stories downloaded, including this one.

Yes, I'm here ten years later... But that story is in my top 10 for sure, even if I didn't understand all of it. It made me have tears in my eyes... what is pretty unusual for a story. (Why Fluttershy... Why ? :fluttercry:) +1 upvote and favourite from me.

That was beautifully written, and... well I still don't have the words.

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