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MetalJrock2299


Just a guy writing stories, mainly crossovers.

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When they first met, Starlight Glimmer and Sunset Shimmer became fast friends. But ever since she returned home to Equestria, Starlight has been thinking about her more often, much to her own confusion.

With each season comes a new realization, and Starlight doesn't know what to make of it until the time comes.


My entry for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Changing Season.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 15 )

Sunset being surrounded by the light of the sun setting, that is something that will make everyone and everypony react the same way Glim, don't worry.

Cute story. I liked it. :ajsmug: You should make a sequel. :twilightsmile:

Now all twilight needs to do is give starlight "The Talk".

Twilight is such a mom in this story.

It's a cute little story. I'd highly recommend getting an editor to look through things though. You have a number of technical errors; slipping between tenses, having the wrong word in a sentence, and an abundance of ellipses (the ... things). Some of the conversations seen a tad forced as well, though that's due to awkward phrasing more than anything.

Spring Fever.

Summer Loving.

Winter wishing.

I'm not sure if anyone has realised (or if this has been done on purpose) but the title for chapter two is 'Sunmer Emotions' instead of 'Summer Emotions'
Once again I don't know if it is intentional or not, but just pointing it out in case it isn't.

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