Starlight Glimmer woke up outside of her body, and wasn't entirely sure whether or not she could climb back inside.
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Trippy.
Nice to know Starlight made it back alright.
I am so confused . Still very good story, have a like.
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Did she though?
Remember, foals. Don't do drugs!
Seriously, though. What happened?
My grasp of the story is that Staright has been shunted from her own body, and is now doomed to watch as that imposter lives her life.
OK, I have no idea what the heck happened - still a nice story.
Wow... That was really Dark and well interpreted, although it took me some time to understand it.
Excellent work here!
Okay, when I read the story, I was confused. After reading the comments, I'm even more confused. Is that actually Starlight happy that she got back, or an imposter faking that happiness?
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This could actually fit the bill of a "Night Terror" which is different from a nightmare.
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What does hypnagogic mean? It's not showing up on my spellcheck.
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Hypnagogia is the state between unconsciousness and consciousness that is experienced upon waking
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being edgy is fine, the same ten jokes in a row isn't fine
Your writing has always been interesting to me, the recent stories more so than the others. You're so unflinchingly forward. Few are willing to dig as deeply as you do, and the results of your digging are really something special. I'm a big fan of strong opening lines, and the first line here is achingly close to perfection when it comes to setting the mood of the story.
Wow, that was intense. It's been too long since I read a Registory and I was not prepared for the emotional beating I received as a result. But, like a night of impulsive kinky sex, I absolutely do not regret a second of it.
Meh
So was this Starlight experiencing what is called a waking nightmare? You are awake but feel paralysed in a dream like state?
I felt the fire on these lines.
I'm glad she was able to get back to herself, but it feels like she will pop out again. Gotta learn to forgive and love yourself, Glimmy Glam.