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Gearsmash King


My problem is having too many ideas.


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Three hundred years ago, a pirate captain named Crimson Moonlight sailed the seas, hunting and pillaging ships for their treasure. He was very rich, dangerous, and feared by any sailor. But, his most valuable asset was an ocean blue gem that granted the captain power over the sea, known as the Ocean's Soul

One day, fate caught up with the captain, causing him to fight until a blade to his chest ended his career of robbery and ruthlessness. However, when his ship was searched, not a single gold piece was found. And the Ocean's Soul was never recovered.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

Interesting story but does feel like it's rushing

8351480
It only feels like that because there are some details missing. But, I did that on purpose. Throughout this story, those details will come to light. Don't worry, everything is under control and future chapters may hold more content than these first ones.

Now this was a lot better! Awesome job with the pacing of the story and it didn't felt empty or rush like the others. Don't worry if it isn't good just remember feed back helps a lot!

8405153
I'll be sure to keep that in mind. Thanks, friend.

Cool this story is alive! Forgot about this till now which I’m excited to see what happens

8552105
Almost gave up on it, to be honest. :rainbowlaugh:

8553798
Man, that would’ve been sad. Don’t give up on this! Have fun writing an awesome sea pirate story :rainbowdetermined2:

8554752
Oh I'm having a great time with this. It's just putting the pieces together and making them fit is the tricky part. But, it works out eventually.

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