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Horizon Spark


Writing My Little Pony stories for you so I can one day become an amazing author! Please comment and tell me what you think.

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Years of letters and regret come back to haunt Grand Pear.

Takes place after the events of "The Perfect Pear".

This is all based on Edowaado's comic "The Life I Never Had". Go check him out because his work is really great.
Original comic:http://edowaado.deviantart.com/art/The-Life-I-Never-Had-688426037

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to paraphrase Toph from "Legend of Korra": Grand Pear may not have been a great father, but one way or another, he ended up with a great daughter and some above average* grandkids...

*what? I can't exactly say "great" in this context...at least not yet... :trollestia:

This could easily have been retitled "Feels".

This needed proofreading. I only say that because it took away from the mood of the story.

It was nice though.

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