This story takes place after the My Little Pony: The Movie but before the Season Eight Premiere
In December of 2017, began the start of Christmas break at my school. Finally, a time of happiness, relaxation from school, and a short period of time where I can play video games all day with my friends.
However, on the first night of Christmas Break, I saw the camera feedback and was confused about what I saw. I went and followed it outside. She told me her name was 'Fluttershy' and that she was lost in a new world and needed to go back to her's. It was up to me to discover and trace back to where Fluttershy came from, how she got here as well as keeping her hidden from my parents, Andrew's gang, and from the government.
Warnings:
- Contains Lots of Swearing At Certain Chapters (Bad Words)
- Slightly Talks About Christianity and Other Religions In Certain Chapters
Will all the chapters be that long?
8488435
No it won't that was just the intro. Others would be a lot short like about 5,000 words average
i personally loved it im awaiting chapter 2 if you want help id be happy to
8536307
Thank you for checking my story out! (Sorry if it's really long) I am working on Chapter Two and more so until Christmas so, yeah other than that thank you for reading it!
your welcome. i wouldnt mind the chapters being long but you can them whatever length you like.
i couldnt really tell what you said in your reply something about christmas?
my offer still stands to help with writing if you want.
8538216
Alright well, thanks. Also, I meant to say that I will try to finish it until Christmas because it goes with the 'Climax' of the story
Why did you make the chapters so long?
8851746
To be honest I don't know, I just want to it to be specific so people can understand what's going on. That's what I'm trying to achive. Also too there's a lot of dialogue, people don't pay attention how many words they talk.
But I just hope that you are enjoying the story