"r5h, your story was also weird in that you had like some of the cleverest jokes in the contest and also some of the dumbest" -Aragon
The most important thing to Night Light is protecting his daughter. She's so smart, and learning so much, but there's dangers that no child can understand.
But tonight's not about that. Tonight is just a bedtime story.
Cover art by Bakki, used with permission.
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I read it. Sweet and poignant. Good work, man.
This is some top-tier storying right here, man.
A delightfully light-hearted story with some great subtle and not-so-subtle undertones woven through the story with the story and the narration. You've really managed to capture a tone that meshes very well with the show, and yet manages to have its own voice. Bravo.
Nicely done! Oro-bro-ro pointed me this way and got me to read the first non-Oro fic I've read in an unfortunate number of months. I was not disappointed,
Way to go Night Light!
A very sweet story. Thank you for writing this, it was fantastic to read.
Keep on writing! Allons-y!
A fantastic one-shot. Carry on!
Simple and to the point, yet you’ve done a good job of putting together a cohesive narrative.
Funny, cute and hearthwarming. Night Light is very clever doing this stunt. I wonder if Velvet knows???
With great power comes those who would abuse it. And, thankfully, those who work to protect it. Especially when it happens to be their child. Great moment for Night Light. Thank you for it.
So much cuteness in so few words
Lovely oneshot. I never thought of Twilight needing protection like that as a foal. I like how you slowly revealed what was going on throughout the chapter. Well done.
Oh, this was beautiful.
Very adorable, could make for a fun episode flashback!
What a wonderful story.
Great work, Night Light.
I love it. That's about all I can say for it.
damn m8. fucking great story
Honk Honk!
You can has review!
Brilliant! You have summed up a good father's willingness to do whatever it takes to allow their gifted foal to enjoy just being a foal... not to mention giving a father a moment to shine in the spotlight... a spotlight that he is doing everything in his power to keep away from said foal.
This deserves so many more upvotes.
Read this months ago but neglected to write a review.
This was a really sweet story. It's interesting that Twilight is already getting so much attention.