This story is a sequel to Sunset's Shindig
Sunny and Twi leave for a nice, relaxing getaway during spring break.
Sex tag for innuendos.
Part of the SciTwi Shimmer Chronicles
Made Popular Stories on 8/9/17
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Ray is actually a leopard gecko, not a salamander.
8355185 Thanks clearing that up. The only reptiles I'm familiar with are iguanas and snakes.
8355361
You're welcome! Also: salamanders are not repitiles, they are amphibians, like frogs. Some salamanders even have poisonous skin.
8355403 Thanks again. My brain has been fried the last few weeks and really haven't been thinking at 100% efficiency.
8356084 Thanks.
I was not notified when this was released. I'll read it later.
8383508 That's cool.
I'm going to guess that Crystal Beach is a nudist beach? Sorry, I'm not interested in that story, so I don't know. I'm also going to guess that Sunset went lingerie shopping which is why she was blushing?
8386499 Answers:
Question 1: Yes
Question 2: TBA
Hope that's not too cryptic.
Well shit, gotta hope that SciTwi doesn't literally fuck this up... Would be hard to explain the entire family if she ends up trying to fuck Sunsets father... Unless they are into that kinda of stuff of course.
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8426590 Maybe Sunny should send her to the Canterlot Library instead.
8426625 I felt that two lavender ponies with a six-pointed star would be a might confusing to the Equestrian public, even if SciTwi is wearing glasses, hence the different cutie mark. And the "blank flank" prank was an attempt to get back at Twi for the fire alarm prank the day before.
8426646 The prank was meant to be on the fly. The scene with Spike was just Sunset being caught up in the story and not really thinking.
What kind of concerns?
8439347 I was getting comments about how it didn't make sense and nothing flowed properly.
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Remember: SciTwi is in heat.
8439347
The original book 7 was a darker setting and didn't fit the storyline
8439347 Here's the original Book 7 if you're interested:
[Adult story embed hidden]
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I liked it I could see it getting reworked so it was it's own thing
8440297 I might after I finish SciTwi Shimmer-Book 7 and My Little Voyager and rewriting Rainbow's Rave.
8440303
I look forward to the possibility of that outcome
8440307 I'll post a blog if I decide to do it.
8440635 Who's to say this is the only trip to Equestria for the interspecies couple?
8440753 Who knows? It just depends on how the level of crazy creativity is when I start writing whatever story I'm writing. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't (Relapse). There's potential for more plus it's going to intersect with my AppleDash series.
Hopefully, this doesn't become a hot topic at the dinner table.
8453872 Lol. Hopefully.
8440843
I agree 100% with the TwiDash thing. The only thing I could think would make it work would be... wait for it... wait... for... it... Daring Do. Of course I've seen stranger ships, i.e. FlutterScratch (I'm not self-promoting or anything
)
8456669 Everypony has their own favorite ship. Mine just happen to be AppleDash and SciSet/SunLight. The FlutterScratch ship that I did was a one time thing that I could only make work in the AU in my first story. (I got that idea from the tent assignments in Legend Of Everfree)
Whelp, at least there won´t be any awkward moments regarding the heat I suppose...hopefully.
How old is Dawnie by the way, since they avoid any sort of sexual topic she needs to be pretty young right?
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I had thought about it and while I couldn't settle on an exact age, I figured 8 or 9. She had to be young enough to avoid certain subjects but old enough to remember Sunset from when she was little.
Why do scenes like this make me tear up every time?
8575721 I try my best.
"I want you. I've always wanted you."
"But what about SciTwi? And wait, what do you mean by 'always'? That sounds sorta creep—ah, whatever! C'mere you giant, sexy Sun-Horse!"
*Sloppy makeouts commence*
8575905 *Scratching my head* That gives me an idea.
8575935
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
8576427 Depends on one's point of view. (For the record said idea won't be put to paper until after Christmas.)
Also, 7.5 is a 404.
8597810 I need to fix that until 7.5 is finished. Sorry.
8597814
Nah, it's cool. These things happen. I just thought I should let you know.
Not sure if i would have ended it there or on the other side of the mirror . .
Otherwise, a good story, could do with a second proof reading though.
Hand? Hand?!
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HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANDS!
Other than that and a second grammar check, great job! Can't wait to see how Pinkie reacts to the ring! And let's hope it's not embedded in her forehead when she gets back...
Needs and epilogue. Besides that, great.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
You're
If you leave home for at least four years and come back with a special somepony, maybe you will be allowed to jump on the bed too, Dawnie.
You weren't lying SciTwi.
I have no clue. Let's find out.
SciTwi better be glad that Pinkie Pie wasn't there to enter that contest.
This was sweet, cute, and touching. Have a like
... and a fave.
Theoretically Sunset's power with the geode exceeds Celestia's as it is an Element of Harmony
That prank, though.
Oy with the heat.
Squee!