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pabrony


A broke(n) artist and writer.

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This story is a sequel to Sunset's Shindig


Sunny and Twi leave for a nice, relaxing getaway during spring break.

Sex tag for innuendos.

Part of the SciTwi Shimmer Chronicles

Made Popular Stories on 8/9/17

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 58 )

Ray is actually a leopard gecko, not a salamander.

8355185 Thanks clearing that up. The only reptiles I'm familiar with are iguanas and snakes.

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You're welcome! Also: salamanders are not repitiles, they are amphibians, like frogs. Some salamanders even have poisonous skin.

8355403 Thanks again. My brain has been fried the last few weeks and really haven't been thinking at 100% efficiency.

I was not notified when this was released. I'll read it later.

I'm going to guess that Crystal Beach is a nudist beach? Sorry, I'm not interested in that story, so I don't know. I'm also going to guess that Sunset went lingerie shopping which is why she was blushing?

8386499 Answers:
Question 1: Yes
Question 2: TBA

Hope that's not too cryptic.

Well shit, gotta hope that SciTwi doesn't literally fuck this up... Would be hard to explain the entire family if she ends up trying to fuck Sunsets father... Unless they are into that kinda of stuff of course.
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8426590 Maybe Sunny should send her to the Canterlot Library instead. :raritywink:

8426625 I felt that two lavender ponies with a six-pointed star would be a might confusing to the Equestrian public, even if SciTwi is wearing glasses, hence the different cutie mark. And the "blank flank" prank was an attempt to get back at Twi for the fire alarm prank the day before.

8426646 The prank was meant to be on the fly. The scene with Spike was just Sunset being caught up in the story and not really thinking.

This was originally Book 8 in the SciTwi Shimmer Series, but due to some concerns with the original Book 7, it was removed and and replaced by this.

What kind of concerns?

8439347 I was getting comments about how it didn't make sense and nothing flowed properly.

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What doesn't Twilight find sexy?

Remember: SciTwi is in heat.

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The original book 7 was a darker setting and didn't fit the storyline

8439347 Here's the original Book 7 if you're interested:

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I liked it I could see it getting reworked so it was it's own thing

8440297 I might after I finish SciTwi Shimmer-Book 7 and My Little Voyager and rewriting Rainbow's Rave.

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I look forward to the possibility of that outcome

8440307 I'll post a blog if I decide to do it.

8440635 Who's to say this is the only trip to Equestria for the interspecies couple? :trixieshiftright:

8440753 Who knows? It just depends on how the level of crazy creativity is when I start writing whatever story I'm writing. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't (Relapse). There's potential for more plus it's going to intersect with my AppleDash series.

Hopefully, this doesn't become a hot topic at the dinner table.

8453872 Lol. Hopefully.

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At least I understand were AppleDash comes from. I really don't get TwiDash that much.

I agree 100% with the TwiDash thing. The only thing I could think would make it work would be... wait for it... wait... for... it... Daring Do. Of course I've seen stranger ships, i.e. FlutterScratch (I'm not self-promoting or anything :derpytongue2:)

8456669 Everypony has their own favorite ship. Mine just happen to be AppleDash and SciSet/SunLight. The FlutterScratch ship that I did was a one time thing that I could only make work in the AU in my first story. (I got that idea from the tent assignments in Legend Of Everfree) :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by pabrony deleted Oct 25th, 2017

Whelp, at least there won´t be any awkward moments regarding the heat I suppose...hopefully.
How old is Dawnie by the way, since they avoid any sort of sexual topic she needs to be pretty young right?

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How old is Dawnie by the way, since they avoid any sort of sexual topic she needs to be pretty young right?

I had thought about it and while I couldn't settle on an exact age, I figured 8 or 9. She had to be young enough to avoid certain subjects but old enough to remember Sunset from when she was little.

Why do scenes like this make me tear up every time?

"Sunset, there is something else I would like to discuss with you," said Celestia as she gently lifted my chin so that I could look into her own tear-filled eyes.

"I want you. I've always wanted you."

"But what about SciTwi? And wait, what do you mean by 'always'? That sounds sorta creep—ah, whatever! C'mere you giant, sexy Sun-Horse!"

*Sloppy makeouts commence*

8575905 *Scratching my head* That gives me an idea. :pinkiehappy:

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Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

8576427 Depends on one's point of view. (For the record said idea won't be put to paper until after Christmas.)

:rainbowkiss: Aaawww~. This series is just so cute! :rainbowkiss:

Also, 7.5 is a 404.

8597810 I need to fix that until 7.5 is finished. Sorry.

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Nah, it's cool. These things happen. I just thought I should let you know.

Not sure if i would have ended it there or on the other side of the mirror . .
Otherwise, a good story, could do with a second proof reading though.

I furrowed my eyebrows as she began giggling at her own joke. I loved her more than anything and nothing would change that. Not even an eternity of embarrassment from my family. As I continued to think about the questions Mom had barraged me and Twi with, I gazed into Twi’s eyes, reached my hand behind her neck and pulled her into long, passionate kiss.

Hand? Hand?!
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HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANDS!

Other than that and a second grammar check, great job! Can't wait to see how Pinkie reacts to the ring! And let's hope it's not embedded in her forehead when she gets back...

Needs and epilogue. Besides that, great.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

"Your not going to yell at her?" Dawnie asked in protest. "That's not fair! The instant you hear me jumping on the bed, I get yelled at but Shimmy and SciTwi are allowed to do the same thing?"

You're
If you leave home for at least four years and come back with a special somepony, maybe you will be allowed to jump on the bed too, Dawnie.

"Thanks, Twi," I said as tears began forming in my eyes.

"Do me a favor, please."

"What do you want me to do?"

"Save your tears for Celestia. I have a feeling you're going to need them."

You weren't lying SciTwi.

What does Celestia want to talk to Sunset about?

I have no clue. Let's find out.

Four hours later, we slowly made our way off the stage with our mouths stained blue from the crystal berry pies. True to her word, Twi ate me under the table and left everypony else to wonder what happened.

SciTwi better be glad that Pinkie Pie wasn't there to enter that contest.:pinkiehappy:

A crystal flugelhorn for Pinkie,

:pinkiehappy::applejackconfused::fluttershysad::rainbowderp::raritycry::facehoof::pinkiehappy:

This was sweet, cute, and touching. Have a like:twilightsmile:... and a fave.:pinkiehappy:

"Sunset Shimmer. I find you guilty of high treason against Equestria," Princess Celestia said angrily.

"What?" I cried. "Why?"

"In lieu of imprisonment, I hereby exile you to the mirror realm," she continued. "You will surrender your journals and the Equestrian Geodes that you and your friends possess upon your re-entry, after which the portal will be destroyed."

"B-but... but what about my... my family?" I continued to sob.

"They will escort you to the portal for a final goodbye."

Theoretically Sunset's power with the geode exceeds Celestia's as it is an Element of Harmony

That prank, though.

Oy with the heat.

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