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pabrony83


I'm just a brony that writes fan fics to cope with depression.


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This story is a sequel to SciTwi Shimmer-Book 6: Sunset's Shindig


Sunny and Twi leave for a nice, relaxing getaway during spring break.

Sex tag for innuendos

Featured on side bar 8/9/17

Cover art by Ramseybrony17

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 57 )

Ray is actually a leopard gecko, not a salamander.

8355185 Thanks clearing that up. The only reptiles I'm familiar with are iguanas and snakes.

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You're welcome! Also: salamanders are not repitiles, they are amphibians, like frogs. Some salamanders even have poisonous skin.

8355403 Thanks again. My brain has been fried the last few weeks and really haven't been thinking at 100% efficiency.

Nice intro to the story.

I was not notified when this was released. I'll read it later.

I'm going to guess that Crystal Beach is a nudist beach? Sorry, I'm not interested in that story, so I don't know. I'm also going to guess that Sunset went lingerie shopping which is why she was blushing?

8386499 Answers:
Question 1: Yes
Question 2: TBA

Hope that's not too cryptic.

Well shit, gotta hope that SciTwi doesn't literally fuck this up... Would be hard to explain the entire family if she ends up trying to fuck Sunsets father... Unless they are into that kinda of stuff of course.
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Spike started to snicker before Twilight gave him a smack with her left wing, effectively silencing him.

That seems a bit mean. Normally she just glares at him.

"Oh, ha ha," Twi said sarcastically. "Speaking of which, what does my cutie mark look like anyway?"

Why wouldn't she already have a cutie mark?

8426590 Maybe Sunny should send her to the Canterlot Library instead. :raritywink:

A look of worry began to spread across Twi's face while I did my best to stifle the laugh that was about to burst through my teeth. Twilight hurried back to check my girlfriend's flank, managing to catch my wink before saying anything and began playing along.

Never mind. I should have read the enitre thing first.

My laughter I was holding in suddenly vanished as I realized my little prank might have gone too far. I laid down on the cold floor beside her and put my left foreleg around her to console her.

I don't think Sci-Twi would outright break down. She'd be more likley to want to come up with a plan to get a cutie mark.

I let out a huge sigh before muttering under my breath, "Twi, two. Me, zero."

Yeah I need to read the enitre thing before I comment again.

"I have no idea," I mumbled.

Did that one even count as a prank?

"Oh," Twi said as she joined me in staring at the floor. "Sooo... what are we going to do?"

Sex. Right? Right?! Right?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!????!!?!?!???

I mean just say "Sex was fun with Twi last night." That's it. You could still keep the T rating. Also hooves are painful.

8426625 I felt that two lavender ponies with a six-pointed star would be a might confusing to the Equestrian public, even if SciTwi is wearing glasses, hence the different cutie mark. And the "blank flank" prank was an attempt to get back at Twi for the fire alarm prank the day before.

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Oh okay. I fail to see how she cordinated it with Spike.

8426646 The prank was meant to be on the fly. The scene with Spike was just Sunset being caught up in the story and not really thinking.

This was originally Book 8 in the SciTwi Shimmer Series, but due to some concerns with the original Book 7, it was removed and and replaced by this.

What kind of concerns?

She moved close to my ear and whispered, "Because I think it makes you look sexy."

What doesn't Twilight find sexy?

"I understand that," I sympathized. "But you need to try focusing on other stuff besides your loins. Think about the prom or graduation or what kind of cake you would want for our we-, I mean, your birthday."

Sunset moves fast.

Twi began giggling and said quietly, "Yeah, in more than one way." I turned and shot her a look expressing my displeasure in her little quip, earning me an innocent sounding "What?"

Holy shit why did that make me laugh so hard. :rainbowlaugh:

8439347 I was getting comments about how it didn't make sense and nothing flowed properly.

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What doesn't Twilight find sexy?

Remember: SciTwi is in heat.

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The original book 7 was a darker setting and didn't fit the storyline

8439347 Here's the original Book 7 if you're interested:

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I liked it I could see it getting reworked so it was it's own thing

8440297 I might after I finish SciTwi Shimmer-Book 7 and My Little Voyager and rewriting Rainbow's Rave.

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I look forward to the possibility of that outcome

8440307 I'll post a blog if I decide to do it.

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Right, right. You know, if this was clop, it could lead to interesting sex.

8440635 Who's to say this is the only trip to Equestria for the interspecies couple? :trixieshiftright:

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So what the next book will just be the same but with clop scenes? (Or do you mean another story you wrote?)

8440753 Who knows? It just depends on how the level of crazy creativity is when I start writing whatever story I'm writing. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't (Relapse). There's potential for more plus it's going to intersect with my AppleDash series.

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Oh okay. I can understand that. Haven't read the AppleDash one, it's not my ship. (Cough cough prefer FlutterDash cough cough but that's just me)

At least I understand were AppleDash comes from. I really don't get TwiDash that much.

Hopefully, this doesn't become a hot topic at the dinner table.

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At least I understand were AppleDash comes from. I really don't get TwiDash that much.

I agree 100% with the TwiDash thing. The only thing I could think would make it work would be... wait for it... wait... for... it... Daring Do. Of course I've seen stranger ships, i.e. FlutterScratch (I'm not self-promoting or anything :derpytongue2:)

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They're not even entirely oppisites like FlutterDash or Rarijack.

(I'd say I'd read your other series, but I prefer FlutterDash so eh.)

8456669 Everypony has their own favorite ship. Mine just happen to be AppleDash and SciSet/SunLight. The FlutterScratch ship that I did was a one time thing that I could only make work in the AU in my first story. (I got that idea from the tent assignments in Legend Of Everfree) :twilightsmile:

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lol nothing. Sorry.

Whelp, at least there won´t be any awkward moments regarding the heat I suppose...hopefully.
How old is Dawnie by the way, since they avoid any sort of sexual topic she needs to be pretty young right?

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How old is Dawnie by the way, since they avoid any sort of sexual topic she needs to be pretty young right?

I had thought about it and while I couldn't settle on an exact age, I figured 8 or 9. She had to be young enough to avoid certain subjects but old enough to remember Sunset from when she was little.

Why do scenes like this make me tear up every time?

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