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SonicAKG


Someone facing his guilty pleasure

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During Canterlot's Familial Day, Shadow starts to contemplate his connection with the Black Arms race he defeated. However, Eclipse the Darkling, his 'brother', manages to escape from G.U.N custody and captures Shadow to brainwash him into serving the Black Arms once more. As a result, the two of them head off to Planet Wisp in order to conquer it and cultivate their species once more. With Shadow gone, it's up to his friends and Team Dark to bring him back to his former senses and remind him where he truly belongs.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 20 )

...Are you going to post a chapter describing the party?Because you really should!

Oh cool Starlight is here.

Nice to see Sunset trying to talk to Shadow. Too bad Shadow just isn't feeling the whole family thing sfter what happened in his past.

Heh, liked that Eclipes enjoyed the Swiss rolls. Poor Shadow never got to enjoy the rest.

So I guess Eclipse is gonna use the Wisp's power to take over the world.

Surprised Sonic isn't part of the team, but good to see team Dark in action. It would be nice to see what Starlight brings to the table.

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I wanted to give other characters the spotlight

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I figured. Which is absolutely fine.

"I have changed my mind! I like you! We should destroy things together!" Omega requested, making Pinkie slightly stumped"

Ah, classic Omega scene.

"Yeah." Starlight said in a tired tone. "I'll be fine. It's just not every day I'm almost killed by plants of all things."

Well good thing you weren't in the season 4 premiere then.

Big mistake on Eclipse part having Shadow go alone. Now they have a better chance at snapping him out of it.

Well Shadow is back to normal and is trying to finish Eclipse off. Also good idea to have Starlight relate to Shadow in losing a friend.

Cool idea to have Shadow and Eclipse use the wisps in their fight.

Good to see Starlight pony up and get the Emeralds. I was afraid she wasn't going to be of much use in this story.

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I wanted to give her a function in this story.

Gotta say kind of weird to see Shadow fight nega mama wisp, but it was still a pretty cool battle.

"Nice work, Shadow. You can add saving a planet to your list of feats. I guess that makes you and Sonic even." Rouge playfully said, causing Shadow to hmpj."

First you should change "hmpj" to hmph. Second didn't Shadow already save a planet stoping the ark from smashing into the earth and killing the black arms?

And good to see Shadow feeling he belongs somewhere.

Good story!!!

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Thanks for catching that, I edited it, though to be fair, for the first part, he had Sonic's help.

Glad you liked it.

Having just caught up on the Archie Comics, I was a tiny bit lost before. But now that I have caught up, I must say how absolutely amazing it is you nailed Omega's Archie personality near perfect.

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Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.

"Yeah, sure. How many times have you been tricked by Eggman, again?" Manic quipped as Knuckles lowered his eyelids in annoyance.

Honestly I lost count a long time ago :rainbowlaugh:

Sunset realized what Sonic meant and quickly let go of Shadow's hand in a flustered manner while Shadow just didn't react.

"No! It's not what you think!" Sunset quickly explained as Sonic walked up.

I'm more into ShadowPie but still nice ship tease :ajsmug:

Shadow felt that strong craving again as he looked at the plate. He then stuck his hand out as he took one of the Swiss Rolls. He then brought to his mouth as he took a bite. Once he did, Shadow's eyes widened as the strawberry filling melted in his mouth and his taste buds danced after he swallowed it. This was.....good.

Was this in the Archie comics? :rainbowhuh: Honestly I can't remember, I thought this was a reference to the Sonic Shorts :rainbowlaugh:

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Yes, Sonic Short reference

"Again, again! Let's go again!" Pinkie excitedly yelled.

Classic Pinkie Pie :pinkiehappy:

"You have a cannon...yet it does not destroy?" Omega slowly asked as Pinkie nodded.

"I have never felt more betrayed." He added in a melancholic tone as he walked away from Pinkie, who gave him a strange look. He then came next to Rouge.

Aww poor Omega :fluttercry:

"Wait a minute, everybody." Pinkie said as looked around frantically. "I'm picking something up with my Pinkie sense."

Pinkie's word caused Rouge to raise an eyebrow as she turned to Sunset and Starlight.

"Pinkie sense?" She asked as if she hadn't heard correctly.

"Pinkie somehow has a sense of knowing whenever certain things are going to happen." Sunset explained. "We don't know how it works and it's best if you don't question it either."

Rouge was still slightly confused, but she had seen a lot of crazy things in her line of work, so she just kept silent.

Yes...for the sake of your sanity do that Rouge :ajbemused:

"You call that firepower?! Let me show you what firepower really is!" Omega exclaimed as he fired a charged shot from his cannon, blowing the plant away.

Reminds me off that old you call that a knife?scene :ajsmug:

"What is this?" Omega wondered as he turned to see Pinkie had caused the explosion. She then started to throw more explosive sprinkles at the plant, each blow causing to spaz out. She then floated up and filled both her hands with sprinkles and shook them around before tossing them into the plant's mouth, creating a giant explosion that sent it to the floor as she floated down. Omega witnessed the whole thing.

"You." Pinkie heard him say as she saw Omega coming to her.

"You are able to release explosions and destroy things by using your hands?" He began as Pinkie proudly put her hands on her hips.

"Yep! It's my super power!" She told him.

Omega then came up to her and put his hands together in delight.

"I have changed my mind! I like you! We should destroy things together!"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA classic Omega Archie...I still remember that...good times :twilightsmile:

"May we start moving now? I wish for more things for me and the pink one to destroy." Omega asked as Pinkie seemed a little taken back by his comment.

Someone's got a crush :trollestia:

"She's right. I am Shadow, the Ultimate Lifeform!" He proudly stated. "This is who I am!"

That line is a classic but still sooo badass :yay:

"I-" Shadow started to say before he was suddenly tackled by Pinkie, who grabbed him a gigantic bear hug.

"Shadow, you're back to normal!!!!!!! I knew we could save you and we did!!!!!!!!" She shrieked with joy as she hugged him tightly, which caused him to groan.

"Maybe being brainwashed wasn't so bad." He said dryly as he winced while Pinkie continued to hug him.

Come on don't be such a sissy It's just a hug :twilightsmile:

"Now, then, hugs and kisses aside, I need to end Eclipse!" Shadow said as he clenched his fight tightly.

Yeah save the hugs and kisses for later :rainbowdetermined2: ... :rainbowderp: wait how is he going to kiss??? :pinkiegasp:

"Fine. Pinkie Promise" He said as he half heartedly did the motion of cross his heart and stick a cupcake in his eye, making Pinkie beam.

...I want art of this so bad right now :trollestia:

"Time for the ultimate power!" Super Shadow declared as he got close enough to the Nega-Mother Wisp as it was charging a large energy sphere.

I think behold the ultimate power would have been better but hey if he wants to boast let him boast :applejackunsure:

"I will be disappointed if there is a lack of violence." Omega expressed, making Yacker look worried again and Pinkie shoot Omega, a 'not helping look.'

Sorry Pinkie but I agree with Omega, this is the final battle so we need violence!!!:flutterrage:

"You have efficiently completed this mission. Though I do wish there was more of..." Omega started to say before Rouge, Starlight, and Sunset shot him looks.

".....hugs?" Omega finished in an unsure manner before he whispered to Shadow. "Is that what the fleshlings wished for me to say?" Shadow shrugged before he turned to the others.

"Though I did save this world, I must admit...." Shadow started to say, as all eyes were on him. They were waiting for him to finish.

"Come on, say it." Sunset said with a smile. "You can do it."

"I....I......couldn't have done it without your help." Shadow said in a small tone, making everyone save for Omega beam

...This made me cry of laughter...so funny :rainbowlaugh:

He says: No problem. We owe you after the Sonic look alike helped us. Hope you guys have fun back on your planet and say hi to Sonic and Tails for us. " Rouge translated, making everyone else save for Omega slightly laugh due to Yacker's comment on Shadow, whose raised an eyebrow.

"Sonic look alike? Don't lump us in together." Shadow muttered as he crossed his arms.

"You know it's trueeeee." Pinkie teased, causing Shadow to pout slightly.

I imagine him pouting the same way he did when he couldn't participate in the tournament at the casino...you know when they adapted Sonic Fighters in the Archie comics :yay:

The entire group headed into AppleJack's home to join in on the occasion. Shadow was the last one to enter and as he did, he closed the door behind him.

And let's hope that door stays closed and he never turns back to open It again...sorry couldn't resist...gotta say nice way to adapt this part of the Archie Comics and I'm glad you didn't fully eliminate Eclipse...I really like him and hope you make him come back later :ajsmug:

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