During Canterlot's Familial Day, Shadow starts to contemplate his connection with the Black Arms race he defeated. However, Eclipse the Darkling, his 'brother', manages to escape from G.U.N custody and captures Shadow to brainwash him into serving the Black Arms once more. As a result, the two of them head off to Planet Wisp in order to conquer it and cultivate their species once more. With Shadow gone, it's up to his friends and Team Dark to bring him back to his former senses and remind him where he truly belongs.
...Are you going to post a chapter describing the party?Because you really should!
Oh cool Starlight is here.
Nice to see Sunset trying to talk to Shadow. Too bad Shadow just isn't feeling the whole family thing sfter what happened in his past.
Heh, liked that Eclipes enjoyed the Swiss rolls. Poor Shadow never got to enjoy the rest.
So I guess Eclipse is gonna use the Wisp's power to take over the world.
Surprised Sonic isn't part of the team, but good to see team Dark in action. It would be nice to see what Starlight brings to the table.
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I wanted to give other characters the spotlight
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I figured. Which is absolutely fine.
"I have changed my mind! I like you! We should destroy things together!" Omega requested, making Pinkie slightly stumped"
Ah, classic Omega scene.
"Yeah." Starlight said in a tired tone. "I'll be fine. It's just not every day I'm almost killed by plants of all things."
Well good thing you weren't in the season 4 premiere then.
Big mistake on Eclipse part having Shadow go alone. Now they have a better chance at snapping him out of it.
Well Shadow is back to normal and is trying to finish Eclipse off. Also good idea to have Starlight relate to Shadow in losing a friend.
Cool idea to have Shadow and Eclipse use the wisps in their fight.
Good to see Starlight pony up and get the Emeralds. I was afraid she wasn't going to be of much use in this story.
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I wanted to give her a function in this story.
Gotta say kind of weird to see Shadow fight nega mama wisp, but it was still a pretty cool battle.
"Nice work, Shadow. You can add saving a planet to your list of feats. I guess that makes you and Sonic even." Rouge playfully said, causing Shadow to hmpj."
First you should change "hmpj" to hmph. Second didn't Shadow already save a planet stoping the ark from smashing into the earth and killing the black arms?
And good to see Shadow feeling he belongs somewhere.
Good story!!!
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Thanks for catching that, I edited it, though to be fair, for the first part, he had Sonic's help.
Glad you liked it.
Having just caught up on the Archie Comics, I was a tiny bit lost before. But now that I have caught up, I must say how absolutely amazing it is you nailed Omega's Archie personality near perfect.
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Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.
Honestly I lost count a long time ago
I'm more into ShadowPie but still nice ship tease
Was this in the Archie comics? Honestly I can't remember, I thought this was a reference to the Sonic Shorts
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Yes, Sonic Short reference
Classic Pinkie Pie
Aww poor Omega
Yes...for the sake of your sanity do that Rouge
Reminds me off that old you call that a knife?scene
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA classic Omega Archie...I still remember that...good times
Someone's got a crush
That line is a classic but still sooo badass
Come on don't be such a sissy It's just a hug
Yeah save the hugs and kisses for later ... wait how is he going to kiss???
...I want art of this so bad right now
I think behold the ultimate power would have been better but hey if he wants to boast let him boast
Sorry Pinkie but I agree with Omega, this is the final battle so we need violence!!!
...This made me cry of laughter...so funny
I imagine him pouting the same way he did when he couldn't participate in the tournament at the casino...you know when they adapted Sonic Fighters in the Archie comics
And let's hope that door stays closed and he never turns back to open It again...sorry couldn't resist...gotta say nice way to adapt this part of the Archie Comics and I'm glad you didn't fully eliminate Eclipse...I really like him and hope you make him come back later