Twilight Sparkle faced a greater challenge that will test her fate and destiny - Restoring Mane Five's true selves, cutie marks and friendship, as well as stopping Sunset Shimmer and retrieve her crown back from Human Realm. What happens to her if she accomplished her mission? What fate awaits her?
* Antagonists: Sunset Shimmer, Mysterious Enemy
* Notes: This is the combination of Magical Mystery Cure and Equestria Girls first film, but this will not follow original storyline. PM and JusSonic's MLP Universe shared the same stories.
* The artwork poster belongs to me.
Awesome start
Yeah
Correction for your statement of your story description.
This story is a sequel to His Light, Her Darkness.
Don't you mean "prequel" ?
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Okay. Fix the minor problems. Thanks.
Guess after reading the ones with twilight and the transformers this explains a lot. Even with the ex sector seven Simmons
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This happens in-between Transformers Dark of the Moon and Age of Extinction. Agent Simmons is too smart and crazy to get caught and killed by government especially if it's Cemetery Wind.
Yeah but wouldn't anyone now that he worked with bots and N.E.S.T?
I mean I would
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No, no one is aware of his identity and real history, not even Principal Celestia. He has Dutch who works for Mearing as her new assistant and both helped and faked the wanted poster with different person while making him innocent. Thus, Cemetery Wind has no clue or idea about Simmons and his history as S7 and working with NEST and Autobots.
Good still guess rainbow is shock when she finds out who he really is?
Beat she go OHMYGOSSOHMYGOSS
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She will. But happens in Rainbow Spark Rocks.
This boyfriend is it shadow dragon?
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Eeyup. I make reference to him only. And plus, Twilight doesn't know him until His Light, Har Darkness Story.
Nice!
Rough execution. Kinda like... verbal diarrhea, really.
Take your time and FLESH out the story.
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does this continue and she gets her crown back or does it continue to the next squeal?
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Yes. It will continued until her ascension to become the Princess. And then, sequel has been set on the link already.
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so i'll have to wait for the next chapter?
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Yes. You have to. I'm now working on Ben 10 True Omniverse Episode 8. After that, I come back to this story's next chapter and do other stories chapter-by-chapter.
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ok
Oh come on, why didn't ALL of the Mane 6 also get sent to that place so they could ALL become Alicorns, after all with Twilight going to be the Princess of FRIENDSHIP, she will need her friends by her side and Alicorns are immortal and her friends are mortal.
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If you read the description, this focused on Twilight Sparkle's ascension to become an Alicorn. And plus, this is prequel to Mystic Pony Universe.
Is that song at the end an actual song or did you just make up those lyrics?
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Yes, the whole music is an actual song, which was intent for first Equestria Girls before they changed it into remix version.
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Can I please get a link to that song?
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This is original theme song for My Little Pony: Equestria Girls.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aJyDsL2wMU
Is this a sequel? Did Nyx get a spanking in a prior story?
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No. This is a prequel to His Light, Her Darkness. I wouldn't say it's spanking, but playfully tickling on her for trying to be funny with Twilight.
Was there a story before this one? Like one that explains where Nyx came from?
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There is. The first story where Nyx make her debut is Past Sins. This story was written by PenStrokePony.
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Okay, Thank you!
Hey I just realized something, if in the human world and pony world their talents are the same like for their talents/cutie marks, then what about Spell Nexus? His is specifically for the pony world as it deals with magic: creating new spells and since magic can't be used by most humans, then what does he do?
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In both versions, he actually acted as Celestia’s advisor, guidance and also teacher to her school. So, therefore, he teach students about history in my EG Version. He also assist what Celestia required.
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Well, yes. While Spell Nexus does do that that's not his special talent, so that made me wonder what it was.
The plot thickens. Wonder what will happen next. (as if we didn't already know)
Out of (scared) curiosity, did this Sombra and Sunset do, *gulp* 'THAT'?
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Do what?
If you're referring Sunset is getting the baddest student to help her out, yes, she hired Tech, the genius brat to find some embarrassment and humiliating moments Twilight has. But if you're talking about the sexual abuse, then no, they're just accomplices/teacher-student only.
>> Shadow Master Oh thank God.
*shudders* I think this version of Sombra is worse that the Pony one.
Sheesh, Sombra's 'master' is reminding me of other cliché Has*ro villians like Megatron or Cobra Commander. . . . . Why do I suddenly have a weird feeling?
(0_0) Welp, I'm out. *runs away crying like Krillian from DBZ Abriged*
Well. . . . . I did not see Sombra's death coming. Kudos to you, you managed to surprise me.
Done. Now then, onwards to the next bit.
I'm going to guess that characters like Lightningblade and Burnblast are from Past Sins like PenStroke, right?
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No. They're not. They belonged to me, and based on both Masamune Date and Kojuro Katakura from Basara Sengoku.
This thing has 9 sequels to it!!! I've never seen this many sequels to a fic since Equestria Ninja Girls!!! And if I'm being completely honest......I'm kinda interested now. Especially now that I know this fic is connected to Past Sins!!! I LOVE PAST SINS!!! NYX IS MY ALL TIME FAVORITE OC in the Fimfiction community!!!!
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You're half right. This story does have sequels but this story in particular is a prequel. If you look at the dates of when those stories were released, you'd know that the other stories were made before this, making this a prequel.
I don't know about you, but I don't think Sombra sexually assaulting Twilight could be considered for everyone.
Hi, I just started reading. It's a sequel to what story. Please tell me the name.
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It's not. This is the prequel to His Light, Herk Darkness.