Sunset has to look at her past mistakes when someone puts them in front of her again. Takes place in between EQG and RR.
Now with a reading by Wubcake! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jN_ex7IuhjQ&t=4s
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This was a good.
I loved that ending!
Wait, if AJ named her fists, why is one of them called 'Kicks?'
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Because she can punch you so hard it would feel like you got kicked.
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Okay
Short and sweet! Great for a first chapter! I'm looking forward to more chapters if indeed you make any.
Nice. Familiar territory, but worth the read.
This was really good, I would love to see more of this. Luna helping Sunset was a really great idea. Because Luna can relate to the what is happening to her.
Great job!
A short but wonderful tale, with a hilarious ending.
A very well written and very a delightful story. I hope to see more added to this very impressive and very well written story. Perhaps adding a sequel to it too.
ahh...trixie...
thats why i cant really stay mad at u
Damn that cut deep in feels
; but I'm relieved that Sunset's friends came to her aid before things could've gotten worse.
It was only a matter of time before someone would make a story from that image, and we're glad it was you
. I'm wondering though if Luna went through a gothic phrase during her time of unhappiness, and called herself Nightmare Moon
?
This one shot definitely gets a like!
Ya know, even if Trixie was the one to start this whole incident in the first place, I do like how Sunset does give her a hand in cleaning up (Literally) Trixie's own mess. Something tells me they'd have a variation of the StarTrix relationship in this world, someday.
AMAZING
That was so touching. Great story
Very touching and nice. Congratulations!
Or what? Are you going to beat her up? As a group maybe? Because she made Sunset cry?
Where were you when Sunset Shimmer made everyone else cry?
Seeing them act like this... I don't know. At least Sunset herself understood. The rest may need to get off their high horses.
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I chose to amplify the hypocrisy from rainbow rocks, because i remember them being supportive of sunset but also kind of shitty??? Like the whole no offense thing got old real fast and i feel like after a while sunset knew they were doing it on purpose.
You really captured how each character would react in this situation. Especially Trixie!
That was nice. Sunset getting a nice bit of insight from Luna and connecting with it was something I wasn’t really expecting. The end with Trixie was nice too, but that may be because I’m a HUGE Trixie fan.
Still a nice simple story is nice after reading what I usually do, it’s nice to step back and just read a nice little slice of life story every once in a while.
Cool story you earned yourself a follow, favouriting this story, tracking and like
awwww you think sunset needs need safe places because words hurt
You know, Luna's childhood with Celestia resembles very closely to that of Hilga and Olga from "Hey Arnold!"
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It's also because that's what she called her bucking legs in the episode "Mysterious Mare Do Well".
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I'm aware of that, I'm just not sure it makes sense to name a fist that PUNCHES 'Kicks.'
Then pay them no heed.
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google did that, it seems
A nice little story. Premise is cute and the conclusion is nice, only thing is perhaps the details could have been flushed out a little. It read a little fast paced, but the idea is definitely there! Good stuff.
I think you mean "horsely". It's how Sunset does everything. :V
No, but this was good. :) Good work on the Human Nightmare Moon scenario!
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hey new York brony its me kristonalprime23 with another GUESS THAT SONG bit, and if you can directly answer the question correctly then you will be honored by me at the 2018 fimfiction Oscars/stories choice awards.
what song is this and who sung it for mlp:fim: the movie?
I know you, you're a special one
Some see crazy where I see love
You fall so low but shoot so high
Big dreamers shoot for open sky
So much life in those open eyes
So much depth, you look for the light
But when your wounds open, you will cry
You'll cry out now and you'll question why
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as they fall on down
I can see your soul grow
Through the pain as they hit the ground
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as the sun comes out
As the sun comes out
I am here and I see your pain
Through the storms, through the clouds, the rain
I'm telling you , you cannot escape
You can do it, just feel baby
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as they fall on down
I can see your soul grow
Through the pain as they hit the ground
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as the sun comes out
As the sun comes out
Here comes the sun
Smiling down
Here comes the sun
Smiling down
Here comes the sun
Smiling down
Smiling down
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as they fall on down
I can see your soul grow
Through the pain as they hit the ground
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as the sun comes out
As the sun comes out
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as they fall on down
I can see your soul grow
Through the pain as they hit the ground
I can see a rainbow
In your tears as the sun comes out
As the sun comes out
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Its rainbow by sia
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AYE you got it you have gotten a 1 in 1000 chance to win stories choice awards and the 2018 fimfiction Oscars, good luck new York brony, and have a great time in preparing for the call ok.
One of my favourite of yours.
The talk with Luna and how Sunset acted in the end is what made me faving it.
Pretty good story, New York Brony. I have a multi chapter story here called “Operation: Sleepover”. I’d like to hear Wubcake read that one like she did with this one.
You forgot to capitalize some stuff.
This was nice, but it felt... short? I dunno. While I felt like the story did a reasonable job at what it wanted to do, I can't help but feel it was a bit short.
I love this. it's really good
I loved this story. I still do, but it's a shame the video about this story was taken down...
Poor sunset.
Probably somebody who wants revenge on her.
Everyone deserves a second chance at something, you do as well sunset.
She's right, especially you sunset. 😕
Busted.
You did the right thing sunset.