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This story is a sequel to Foal Quest
Reading the first story isn’t necessary but it is still a good read.
--cover art--
Starlight Glimmer had enjoyed her little joint adventure with Twilight and Moondancer, but she had never imagined that by helping to win the game that she would be rewarded with being turned into a foal for a week. Unable to reverse it until the spell wears off, Starlight had no choice but to just go with it. Who knows, maybe it will be fun?
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Wonder if we'll find out what Starlight meant when she mentioned her comment about potty training while fighting the potty monster?
Great chapter I hope you can update soon
I would also like to add that I would also like to see how Flurry Heart and Starlight interact with one another and how Starlight would reat to being told of by Twilight because Starlight's magic is powered by her emotions just a thought hope you can update soon.
Well... Not quite.
8328765. Not sure how those two would interact. Javier t thought yet of starlight can speak babble. Shell get to play with the twins someho, see Twi parents and princess'
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Thanks for the reply I hope you can update soon
Thanks for the update I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope you will be able update asap because I just can't wait for the next chapter.
Bushel of apples. I just had to point that out.
Starlight should have been scolded for sticking out her tongue. I know I was when I was a kid.
Also, not to be picky, but what happened to the pink stroller? You mentioned it once in one paragraph and then had Starlight go back to being in Twilight's foal carrier.
Wonder how Starlight would react to messing herself, assuming that hasn't already happened off-screen.
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Woops your right that is a mistake on my part I should go fix that.
Done
Cover photo is just adorable! And the story so far is really good can't wait for more
This story is totally adorable!!
You should really post the source of the cover art.
Also there's some errors that need to be fixed:
Affect.
This sentence just doesn't flow very well, it reads very awkwardly. Sorry I can't offer much than that for it.
Chapter 2 was an improvement but I felt like you used 'babied' far too much. Also some advice, think about how you want the story to end before you start writing it. Otherwise you'll likely never finish it.
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Oh derp thanks for piontimg that our. I do have an end in mind just thT parents thing I hadn't thought through fully. Yeah that one sentence is pretty awkwardly written
I don't believe Twilight would just tell Trixie intentionally, or opt to take Starlight to see her parents. Now, if the magic was affecting her, that would be different.
I want to see Trixie have to change starlight diaper just once!
Thanks for the update I've really enjoyed this chapter. I hope you will be able update asap I also hope there is a way for Starlight to stay a filly becuae I have really enjoyed seeing the mother and daughter like bond between Twilight and Starlight.
Possible combo Winnie the Pooh and Brother Bear reference?
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I really love this story
Why did you link to the cover art twice?
Not just Sunburst, Starlight, you're also going to see Flurry Heart. Which means you'll have a playmate.
Such a fun story. If i might suggest a sequel with the other princesses 'enjoying' their own adventure.
Is there a possibility of spike getting a regression?
Another great chapter I hope you will update again soon. It will be intresting to see how Starlight and Flurry Heart will interact with each other I wonder if they will bring chaos to to the Crystal empire.
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Seperate story perhapes but no room in this plot
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Thank you for telling me it would be a cute story
I wouldn't mind Spike as a hatchling.
It would be funny if there was a small print that said that all three members have to be present to reverse the spell if not it will not work just an idea.
Anyway great chapter I have really enjoyed both you stories and I can't wait for the next chapter I hope you can update soon
It'd have been cute to see Starlight play with the Cake Twins.
cute
Cute, funny, just plain adorable. 10
s.
SEQUELLLLLLL!!!!!
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Eeee been wanting to read this but have not had time so cute I squeed
MAKE A SEQUEL WITH SPIKE AS A HATCHLING NOW!!!
-STARLIGHT
The first chapter was very... nice. I like how it reflected a bit on starlight's time as an ACTUAL foal and not one because of the effects of a story. Keep it up!
In the second chapter, you said that starlight kept drifting in and out of the filly mindset, maybe the spell will wear off gradually?
3re chapter. Still a fun fanfic.
Is there going to be a sequel of spike in the book?
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I mean I had been working on it and then got kind of sidetracked. I mean I do have a loose plan for it at some point hopefully won’t take me 1 million years
Great Story please do a sequel about Twilight looking after baby Starlight
Aw, so cute! This was written really well, and Starlight was just too adorable. The ending kinda had me like “o..Kay.” But I still really enjoyed it.
Huh. How thoughtful.
AGH THE CUTENESS IS STRONG!
the cuteness is over 9000!
MORE CUTENESS PLEASE!