After missing an opportunity to perform in Manehatten, Octavia rides her usual train back to Ponyville in a dark mood. She tries to relax and simply nap or otherwise occupy herself until the train arrives at its destination, but some shady train operators claim that her ticket is invalid, and that Ponyville isn't one of the stops.
Octavia suspects a shakedown, and after being ejected from the train, she waits to defend herself from a possible mugging, but nothing comes. Instead, Octavia finds herself alone on the train platform, struggling to keep herself sane as she waits for the next train.
Chapters (3)
....that's ok, I didn't need to sleep this month anyway.
God damnit! I told you dicks to LOCK the Scary Door so nopony can stumble into the Twilight Zone, not UNLOCK it!
Pretty obvious story but it's still good it still have it's moments. 7/10
wow its amazing nobody commented on the first and second chapter but on the last, that tells how thrilling this story is and what was that thing???
So... Octavia put on the creature as clothing? Yikes.
This has been in my favorites for a long while, so it was time to tackle it. Premieres this Saturday https://youtu.be/XFpOcwKx9jk
February 13th! https://youtu.be/48dAz-PXYeA
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... *realizes the date, and slaps you with a fish*
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Truly a intriguing story, I really liked it. Personally I believe this should have more views, the writing was pretty good, you did a good job at describing environments and scenes, which I believe is always important for imagining scenes. I liked the direction it took from start to finish, the creature and ending were very interesting, it really had me questioning and theorizing what happened, because the ending happened in, what I felt was a very subtle transition to what was happening, and I did like it cause it confused me and it also was sad. Overall I very much so enjoyed it.