Based upon elements from Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven."
I've searched high and low, throughout all of Equestria, yet I haven't found her. At my wits end, I stumble upon an old cemetery, hoping this place might be where she lays. Are you here my angel?
Edited by tommal
Pre-read by link4
Dramatic Reading by Sparrow9642 (Original Draft)
Dramatic Reading by MatfixBrony (Original Draft)
Reviewed by the Reviewer's Cafe - 7/10 - Rejected (First Round - Original Draft)
Reviewed by the Reviewer's Cafe - 8/10 - Accepted (Second Round - Rewritten)
Chapters (1)
Beautiful piece.
8324190
Thank you.
Gotta say this is a pretty good story though there's only one thing that confuses me and it's this sentence " As my hooves ached in pain, I mind simply raced with questions." shouldn't it be "As my hooves ached in pain, my mind simply raced with questions." other then that minor error it's pretty good I might do a reading of it I know it's still very new but I kinda think since I'm still a new fic reader I should try to do more recent stories since other readers probably already done a lot of other stories. Anyway you did a pretty good job on this story.
8331137
Fixed, and thank you. I'm honored you want to read this story and I can't wait to hear it. I'm extremely proud of this work and I appreciate the effort and time you want to take and record it.
Thank you once again.
Also, greetings from Galacon!
8331345
Alright I'll be sure to get started as soon as possible hopefully I can do it well.
Nice story. I especially liked your vivid descriptions of the graveyard. Good job!
8342795
Thank you. I really pushed on the detail in this story.
I have reviewed your piece at the Reviewer's Café. Thank you for putting forth all your effort in the creation of this piece.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=4#comment/6099866
8409987
Thank you for the review. I'm sorry to have wasted your time for a story not to make it in.
Then again, I've never been one to please the critics.
8410481
You did not waste my time. Every review I do helps me improve in my own writing, so it's hardly a waste of time. I hope my nitpicks weren't unhelpful to you, because quite honestly you have great talent in writing.
Your story has been accepted into the Good Grammar Directory.
Congratulations!
8472804
Thank you very much! It means a lot to me.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews#comment/6183016
Congrats on the rewrite being accepted into the reviewers cafe I gotta make sure to redo the reading of it to match the current rewrite