• Member Since 18th Apr, 2017
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InkHeartBrony


I love sarcasm. It's like punching people in the face but with words.

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I used to have one job, I was a mare who hunted vampire's to protect others, but most of the time you saw me, I wasn't jabbing a wooden stake in a creature from tartarus.

Normally I had my muzzle in a book, a real nerd I am. But one that isn't afraid to get their hooves dirty, or bloody in this case.

But now seeing my friend become one of them because of me- I couldn't continue my job as a vampire hunter.

Now it's my job to protect my vampiric friend from the ponies I hunted along side with, and also make sure Rainbow doesn't do anything dumb.

So now it's my job, and for some reason Rainbow Dash's too, to make sure nopony harms Fluttershy, and that Fluttershy harms nopony.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 14 )

keep going mate! i want to see how this turns out.

feedback note: it'd be nice if you slowed it down and added more details to every thing now and again, my point being it just flows like a river with no rocks to mix it up.

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Thank you a lot for the feedback! Glad you like it :twilight smile:

Huh interesting. Tracked.

Um, shouldn't the Tragedy tag be added because of the ending? Or does the whole "doorway of fear" thing coming into play prevent that?

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The door was locked with dark magic, meaning only dark beings, (vampires) were supposed to get in. (maybe whoever built it originally was hiding something there) Fluttershy came across it when she went out as a vampire, and brought Spike down there to, store him, in a way. Also, no tragedy tag because Spike's not dead.

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But the end of the chapter said...

Ok, you have me hooked, attentive, and intrigued. I need to know how you are going to explain that ending.

"I only killed you because you stole the key to get this." <<< What the heck?! :derpyderp1:

"I only killed you because you stole the key to get this, and you know, it was my job to kill vampires."

I added to it after reading your comment. Didn't entirely make sense originally. Thanks for letting me know.
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So if she has what I'm guessing a electric alarm clock is there cars and guns in this story?

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy will be badass in this story, right?

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Haha I sometimes forget that pony world doesn't have electric things :rainbow laugh: I put in an electric clock without even realizing they don't have them!

I'm not planning on putting cars in, but guns are a possibility. :trixieshiftright:

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Oh definitely :flutter rage: :rainbowdetermined2:

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Read one of my more recent stories. There are two guns in it that i would use. But to clarify I don't hunt vampires. My older sister is secretly one living in Canterlot working for Luna

Take note. I'm currently in Ponyville spying two hunters nears Shys house. Should I intervene?

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