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RarityEQM
Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
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*sees new fic*
Hmm says it's really weird ehh can't be that bad lemme check the trigger warnings *checks*
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...Call me crazy, but I think there is some spanking in this story.
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there might be
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thanks for dropping by
O,o I freaking love this story... Amazing piece. Like and followed. Luna is best pony xp
Wow.
That chapter title though.
"Now presenting, Mama Cass"
I really enjoyed it. This was an interesting look at power dynamics. And hot. Really hot.
I loved it.
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thought you might like this one.
Brilliant. Loved it. Great work both of you!!!
Oh, my!!!
Twilight attempting a coup and is mentally and physically humiliated and humbled. Certainly never thought Twilight would enjoy this type of 'instruction'! It's always the quiet pony, yes?!
Very well written, darling. I congratulate you both, though I see your special style greatly influencing the plot(hee-hee). I enjoyed it very much! ;)
always the bookish ones
Y'know, I like several parts of this story, but I just can't seem to look past the fact that the princesses are being cruel and abusive of the power over Twilight. I know everyone will be like ' if you don't like the story then don't read it' or something else. So I'd like to make something thing clear, I am not dissing or trying to ruin this story, I just needed to get it off my chest.
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personally, I rather like the gentle approach myself..
8326379
Are you saying that this is your version of a gentle approach story wise or are talking about something different
Even if Twilight wanted it, I think the princesses were a bit over the line. Another part of me says that she decided not to wake up so she wouldn't have to experience the pain of them doing her in real life. Otherwise, it was sorta hot, but I still feel guilty, almost as if I had just read a rape-fic. I really don't know exactly why, though.
Very impressive. You were great with the characterization, especially on Celestia. the kind of loving and kind yet still terrifying and unquestionable authority that Celestia possesses.
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I actually like they went a little bit too far. They have the power to do so and it's a dream so it's not like it will have real world consequences. Besides that letter made it clear Celestia had no bad intentions.
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Well said
Indeed, darling, I tried to make it clear this was consensual at least, in a sense. Twilight could have woken herself whenever she wanted. She was not harmed in the real world.
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Though it seemed Celestia's domination was to some extent serious.
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Either way, I'd have a bad feeling if my mentor and her sister suddenly did me in my dream like that just to prove a point that they CAN. I don't think I'd be able to talk with then face to face for weeks unless I knew for sure they were messing with me, because Celestia and Luna don't really seem that kind of sadistic-sounding in canon.
Regardless, it was a good read and not just because of the sex.
First off, this was amazing and incrediblely hot. I will admit I had the same feelings as others about how maybe it went overboard, I can’t honestly believe Celestia and Luna would think of themselves as better than Twilight. You gave Twilight an out and the fact she was incredibly turned on both inside and outside of dream lessened it a bit. But something about that letter did not really strike me as a warning, almost a invitation to Twilight if she so desired. What do you think Miss Rarity?
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I would say you were on the right track darling. >=3
It feels like the spanking is very soft.
The next night-
BEHOLD, I HAVE TAKEN OVER ALL EQUESTRIA! THE ONLY THING THAT CAN STOP ME NOW IS TO BE TIED UP AND PADDLED SILLY!
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Hee n.n
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Probably a result of Celestia's own gentle nature even when administering "discipline."
8935639
Well the discipline was meant serious and Celestia doesn't have to be soft. After all it she doesn't physically harm Twilight in this dream.
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Well, no they weren't trying to hurt Twilight. Did you want them too?
Also, Spit-roasting a pony is soft in your books? o.O
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Really? It did seem like Celestia was somewhat trying to discipline Twilight.
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Darling, we may have differing definitions of harm.
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what do you mean with that?
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I mean, err, don't worry about it, dear.
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no, no. I am really curious now. I define 'harm' as leaving permanent damage either physical or mental and since this was a dream Celestia could actually run the risk of really harming Twilight without that being permanent.
Finally got around to reading this. That spankingi.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/019/698/d96.jpg
Damn fine story. The writing itself is loose though saved by a lax fluidity. There are numours mistakes in terms of basic grammer—capatlizing the 's' in "words, " She said' despite it being a proper noun and not the start of a new sentence.
But the sexy factor is top-notch! Even if feelings of hazy construction follow the piece, the sheer dirtiness if the act, power dynamic exploited with the dialogue, and unique sex descriptors render this story as entertaining to read as it is for the other purpose.
3/4. Good job as usual, Soul Sister.
~ Yr. Pal, B