• Published 12th Sep 2017
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CYOA: Bronytale - Amereep



An interactive story influenced by 'Undertale'. You're human and appear in Equestria for 24 hours. You can make friends if you wish, but you'll be stuck in Equestria and start becoming a pony if you do.

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You form a fist and pound her hoof to confirm with her offer.

*Snap*

You hear that strange sound again and look to find the source, but you still find nothing.

"Woah!" The mare says in astonishment, "How'd your ears do that?"

You place your hands on your ears, but you're feeling nothing there. You begin to panic and start patting all over your head for your ears. You freeze feeling two thin flaps at the top of your head. You stroke them and rub your finger on them. The soft sounds you're making can easily be heard there, which should be unheard from where your ears were. It hits you at what you're touching, you now have horse ears at the top of your head.

"Do you creatures do this sort of thing?" the pegasus asks.

You tell her that you're not from this world and that you need to see Princess Celestia in order to get home.

Dash's eyes suddenly shot open, "Wait, home!?!" she looks at the sunset, "Ah shoot! They're going to kill me. Sorry, but I just remembered something I promised my folks I'd do before sundown. Gotta go!" She flies off with a rainbow trail leading behind her.

Your gaze returns to the castle, "Oh!" You look behind you and see that Dash has returned, "I wanted to say that you can trust Celestia. She may not seem like it at times, but shes always looking out for the best interest of everypony." You thank her for her concern.

"You got this, pal!" She encourages and you both head off your own directions.


Night has finally arrived as you approach the castle. It's much bigger then you thought it was from the distance. Finding the princess in this castle won't be a walk in the park.

You walk your way across the drawbridge.

"HALT!"

You stop at the command of two unicorns ahead of you with gold armor on. Their horns are glowing with floating spears in front of them pointed directly at you.

"Leave this instant!" one yells at you.

You tell them that you need to see Princess Celestia.

"I'm not going to allow a creature like you anywhere near the Princess."

You say that she's the only one that can help.

"Then you're going to have to get your help elsewhere."

You begged them that they just gotta le-

You suddenly jump back from a magical bullet nearly hitting your feet. "LEAVE!!!" they both demanded.

There's nothing you can do, these ponies will pummel you if you try to fight them. They have magic, weapons, numbers and that's from you can see from the outside. Who knows how many more ponies are on the inside that find your current appearance unsettling.

The only thing you can do is to leave, wait for the rest of your day to end and hope for the best.


You find a tree in a secluded area and wait there for the time being.

You lay your back to the tree and start to think how you arrived at this moment. Maybe there was something you did wrong? Maybe you did something right? You just can't find any conclusion to this turmoil you're in.

"Looks like we hit a brick wall."

You hear a voice coming close by.

"And it appears we won't CONTINUE."

You look down and see amber grayish mushroom, Mooshy, talking to you.

"Looks like you can't make up your mind, much like the human/pony you are. So, I'm going to end this game here."

You don't understand what its was talking about.

"I know what you're thinking 'Why don't I go back to a certain point' or 'Why don't I just go to the part that I want.' Well then answer me this, 'What chapter are you on?'"

You're not even certain that its talking to you anymore.

"That's right. All of these chapters are only dashes. There's around two hundred chapters so finding the chapter you want isn't possibly easy. No matter what, you won't be able to CONTINUE the story unless you try again from the START. Don't believe me? Look at the chapter list and you see only dashes."

It's almost as if its talking to someone else.

"So there you have it, you can't CONTINUE this story anymore. If you're sharp enough, you might just see what you've missed and then you could CONTINUE the story next time."

As for who its talking to, you...... just can't tell.

"I believe I've stayed my welcome. We can CONTINUE this conversation some other time, but for now, I'll be sending you back."

"Until then."

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