A lighthearted story about Flutterbreeze, mailpony/secret agent from Fillydelphia. He travels on a mission to Ponyville, meeting some interesting ponies, who are a bit suspicious.
Mane 6 included, plus other characters from the show, and a first look at his friends in Fillydelphia.
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My god, is that crayon?
Is that a flying bus with fish attached to the sides
Alright, as much as I enjoy the playful ribbing about my drawings, I hope someone could have something to say about the story itself. Oh well, at least people are reading this (average of 3 chapter views per person, not too bad.)
Anyways, there are some things I would like to say. Firstly, this story was not planned out at all, I honestly just started typing it out one day, publishing the parts as I went.
My reason for writing this was for my own enjoyment, but if other people like this, that is great. Criticism is always appreciated. I dare you to say something that makes me upset, for you can never break my self-esteem!
I will continue writing even if nobody reads this. Currently trying to think of major plot points for the next story (Yes, I'm actually putting some planning into it.) Particularly I am needing a villain.
If anyone can make a better picture for this story, I would gladly use it as a replacement for my own. *Throws gauntlet down*
Well, if you are reading this far down, thanks for your insanity.
Also I forgot to mention, this could technically be considered a self-insert (or an autobiographical tale told in the third person by a pony) so bash me if you wish. Flutterbreeze is by no means a perfect pony, and hopefully I can show this as I continue writing. Basically for this story, I just wrote what I thought would be either logical or comedic based on the characters and let the madness happen.
Again, any questions
, comments 
, insults 
, or (Celestia-fobid) requests 
: are not only appreciated, but encouraged.