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The Usurper


I write stories. One day, I'll be really, really good at it. One day.

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What else can you do when your life has already been decided for you? Set one thousand years into the future, this is the story of a Pony who has been chosen by none other than Princess Luna herself to avenge the now-defeated Equestria. But what may come if he does not wish to shed blood or put his life on the line for a dead country? These questions have never been asked. Thus begins the battle against destiny, during which the past history of the war and its aftermath become clear. And maybe - just maybe - life may return to the dying embers of a nation, extinguished by War, in the process. And so the legend of vengeance is brought to life after a country's death.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

Took a minute to find, as the I's don't look out of place.

Take a thumb mainly because you're brave enough to put deliberate errors in the description. Even more so for the idea behind the errors.

The pens mightier than the sword

I got bored, so I decyphered it :V. Not bad.

Might check it out. We'll see.

Maybe you should add accidental spaces in the description, because I thought the wods "pen" and "is" were the same :twilightoops:

You shouldn'T have given that hint at the end abOut the descriptiOn. That would have madE it fAr more satiSfYing a puzzle. :pinkiecrazy:

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"I have to ask, Trebek, about 'The Penis Mightier.'" :rainbowlaugh:

A "fist" of vengeance?
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'cough cough'

Very interesting. hope you keep the story up

The pen is mightier than the sword. It is very much so.

Why is this getting so many dislikes? D:

Well that was depressing. :fluttershysad:

I know you did something there, but it is 3 AM and I don't feel like braining right now. I'll be back tomorrow.

well :applejackconfused:, i must comment give in this story :scootangel:, the sotry is good and amazing :duck:

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