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Jongoji245


A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.

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This story is a sequel to Monsters of Everfree


It's graduation time for our favorite group of girls, and they have some big plans to do before going to college.

But the world has plans for them. Chaotic plans. Attacks long associated to be natural disasters are turning out not to be natural disasters. Monsters... no, gods are rampaging the earth.

But even in the darkest of times, there will always be a little light to shine the way.


Possible/Probable Swan Song. As with before, has a Q&A.

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 41 )

Well, despite how short the prologue was, I will admit, its looking pretty good.

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Okay, now it's fixed.

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When's the next chapter ready?

Looking good, so what took you so long...?

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August to November will have two chapters uploaded on the first and last Wednesday, the rest will be uploaded each month on each special day of the month, with the last chapter being published just a day or two before Godzilla: King of the Monsters" is released.

Whoa nelly! Nice to see Capper and Captain Celaeno making an appearance.

I'm always waiting for someone writing this :D

See we're starting things off like it's High School Musical 2. Not a fan of the HSM series myself, but with a promise of Elephant Whales, Mega-Butterflies and a three headed golden death dragon, I can't complain.

This is a parody of the MLP Movie? I was not expecting this. But I approve ten-fold.:pinkiehappy:

Ok got to ask will Equestria have consequences for sending their problems to earth or they get scot free again?

When the fighter pilots are chasing Rodan, I couldn't help notice a number of similarities to The Giant Claw. I assume these were intentional?

When the captives look out the window, they see the animal suddenly start jerking. His chest starts puffing up, swells up his throat, and hocks out a slimy pellet.

Did he just yarp? Did Rodan, the Supersonic Pterrasaur, just yarp? :applejackconfused: Okay.

Nice work.

Was that a ghidorah knock off at the end?

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I've updated my FAQ blog on this story, link available on the front page of the story.

Thanks by the way. :twilightsmile:

How have none of us ever thought of that before!? The second larva from the egg was Battra. It's so obvious, why have none of us ever thought of that?

The 'Steve Martin' commentary from the English Godzilla. Thank you for including it.

He tosses the bottle and shuts the window. To the surprise of the world, the bottle crashing on his skin stops Gojira. He turns his head to the hotel, but as the windows were designed to keep sunlight away, he can only see his own reflection. Just like any animal, Gojira observes his doppleganger with both curiosity and frustration before letting out a snort and go on his way.

Radar has picked up a helicopter going soi soi soi.

Not bad, nice to see you added the Godzilla vs Mecha-Godzilla reference

Ghidorah did WHAT to Sunset's homeworld!?

Having caught up with your whole trilogy now. I must say my biggest complaints with your story is the pacing, and characters. To elaborate, your crossover trilogy feels like it's rushed. I had some trouble keeping up with what was going on. It was one scene & plotline going to the next with little time to process. I suggest slowing it down a bit with your story, and sparing some time to flesh out your characters a bit. Which brings me to my second point, your characters feel less like characters, and more like functions to a script. I know these characters by merit of being a G & MLP Fan, but I don't feel like I know these characters. They've been so caught up in the action that they've rarely had time to act like people.

Those are my criticisms to the story, but overall, it's still a decent read. And I'll be following its development.

EDIT: And on a sidenote, one too many scenes in your stories, especially the early ones, feel too much like a one to one reference to the Canon material. It's nice to have a shout out on the occasion, but taking quotes & scenes almost word for word makes your fic feel lacking in originality.

This was alright.

Let's get ready for the next battle. Though I don't remember Ghidorah having arms, can you clarify on that?

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His wings are arms. Had that in mind long before even the first trailer came out. Though in this case, his arms are more like Orga's.

Wow really interesting article, may later be able to share other helpful information are more interesting happy wheels

Doing a decent job so far, though I suggest elaborating a bit more on the details of why an opponent is losing a battle.

So... the whole, the human world is the pony world's past subplot is, void?

So ending 1, huh? Not bad.

Let's see what else can happen.

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