Mistaking Rat poison for a can of sugar in the morning does seem to be the recipe in proving the multiverse theory, magic and the existence of wanna be Care Bear copy cats in horse form. Also I am now one of them too. Octavia where is my coffee?
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huh this is a pretty sweet story.
No offense to your editor, but this seriously needs more editing before beeing posted. There’s too many errors to even list them all.
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Then help me? All the chapters are saved of GoggleDoc.
Poor Octy, even when our hero tries to help she ends up being alone. That's got to hurt.
So that's a troll cutie mark, nice to see that he got it so early and so that could be out of the way, I somehow doubt that's going to give him an insubstantial crises about himself with how stubborn and belligerent he is. Still, it could be interesting how they will try to celebrate his gaining if his mark with his family.
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Aggressive? How his he aggressive.
Also I forgot to actually make a little sketch of how his cutie mark looks like.
Guess I should do that for the next chapter done...which is already finished.
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No, Belligerent as in Argumentative Loudmouthed Quarrelsome Confrontational Pugnacious Stroppy Cantankerous Crabby, Difficult
The mark of tomfuckery.
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Now that sounds a lot more like Alex.
Well done.
Alex should've danced to this, to be honest.
now all alex needs to do is find the forbidden dildo
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Yeah that definitely doesn't match the 80s theme.
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Nah, not RETRO enough.
8760786 i know
Drawing of his mark would be nice. Awesome chapter by the way, had me laughing which is difficult : )
You should re-edit this chapter, to many typos and misspellings
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Help me then.
So he got the masks of Comedy, Tragedy, and Crackfics?
Somehow that... really fits.
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I personally call them, Humour, Drama and Action. Going for the movie versions here if you did not realize. :D
I'm having a hard time picturing what that third mask look like. I know it's just me.
... I need an Olivia side fic.
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I immediately thought about classic Japanese tengu mask.
Please for the love of everything unholy give Alex some chaos magic