Mistaking Rat poison for a can of sugar in the morning does seem to be the recipe in proving the multiverse theory, magic and the existence of wanna be Care Bear copy cats in horse form. Also I am now one of them too. Octavia where is my coffee?
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Well good story, I just hope he isn't permanently mute. We need his snarkiness to be heard.
Im loving this
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I agree, his sarcasm needs to be heard. Preferably by Twilight
Sketches would be interesting to see. Good story so far, I'm definitely looking forward to more.
The first time I heard of Mystic Tune, I was like" OMG! A potential ship in the future when they're grown up?" Then I saw that mystic was a he...
Poor foals and deep care, the foals miss out on potential parents and deep care nearly breaks her from neck Alex's behavior. He better be a damn good brother in the future chapters (that's if we get past his mant internal monologues and procrastination).
my god i am so alex i cant get enough cheese
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you can still ship it
not bad. keep it up
So, it's about to start. I seriously wonder what kinds of shenanigans will Alex get to now.
One post-edit that I noticed just now (further proving that editors just people too )
it's smells and on
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Get out of here with gay stuff.
Straight for the win!
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you cant tell me what to do your not my real dad
I had a feeling that we would see Mystic Tune again. I also get the feeling we will see Tetra again, but I hope I'm wrong on that one. I hope they don't try to leave without his tablet and coffee mug.
Alex must be secretly devistated that he wasn't reborn in the pony equivalent of Wisconsin.
What is the year difference between this and the other story? I'm not quite far enough in that one to have a good guess yet.
Yeah I would like to see the concept sketches.
Also Found a few mistakes
Watch and be amuse
*amused
Those three will fine
*be
This, of course, was immediately rather suspicions on my end.
*suspicious
Interesting chapter, nice to see he likes the guys fancy British talk that got him to hold still just a moment enough to catch their eye on him,
Great story so far.
I'd love to see some concept sketches.
I have a question though: Why has no one commented on the fact that Alex has a tablet?
I would have expected someone to raise an eyebrow upon seeing such a device.
All your characters seem to love dairy. I guess that's you projecting onto them.
Though, I've always wondered, how would a human react if he learned that the cows can talk?
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He would have a conversation with them. Simple.
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He hasn't shown it to anyway besides Mystic. Or just used it in private. So nobody else has seen it working.
Also he is just to lazy to answer all of those question that may arise at showing his such a device. He is not stupid after all.
Procrastination for the win.
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Depends on if they're a furry? Heh.
Great story so far I can't wait to see him interact with his new sister.
YES!!
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Yet again, another amazing chapter, keep it up!
Ah~ So great... How can he fuck this up?
**10 Chapters Later**
Well shit.
A fair amount of typos in the last couple chapters. And the two times in this one where Alex claims to have made a rhyme? I didn't see anything preceding either claim that actually rhymed, so I'm wondering if maybe it rhymed in your original language, and not in English?
Tell me which two words are rhymes in your language, and I'll even try and come up with suitable rhyming replacements for ya. :p
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to lazy, come back later.
I need...MORE! Really liking this story so far, hurry up and make more :D
Can't wait to see how he and filly Octavia interact.
(Though maybe that's just because Octavia is my favorite background pony.)
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First off, nuclear fission, not fusion is what makes atom bombs. We split the atom, not combined it.
Their= someone else's
there= a place
they're =they are
I hope this helps a little bit. I understand English is a nightmare if you didn't grow up with it.
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Cue, also I was hoping to hear the bully's reaction that he did get adopted after he owned their stupid flanks
I think the first O should be a U.
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Nope, that one was intentional.
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Because ‘‘oni’’ as in those Japanese demons?
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I'm Russian, and for me English is easy. I have problems with commas but that's because I mix Russian and Elgnish rules of grammar a lot. Though, a difference between their, there, and they're is really big and I can't see why people keep forgetting what to write. Granted, there is a big difference in my native language between said words but they're not that hard.
Try Russian and you'll discover it's full of bullshit.