Mistaking Rat poison for a can of sugar in the morning does seem to be the recipe in proving the multiverse theory, magic and the existence of wanna be Care Bear copy cats in horse form. Also I am now one of them too. Octavia where is my coffee?
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Wow... was on the feacture box for the day it was published and was still there when the first update came... If that doesn't show that this should be a good story I don't know what will.
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My hype train is moving and don't have any brakes.
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Amen bro
Cheese exists, but if I give you some I'm hoarding the coffee for myself!
interesting situation so far, the guy is certainly sounds like he is not exactly easy to get along with and it's only his luck that he is a mute that prevent him from having his neck ring at all. I wonder if his condition his permanent of if he will have to through a specifically to get treated. I wonder if Octavia's parents are going to adopt him because they can't have any more foals for some reason. by the looks of things they will probably make him play an instrument if he is wants to keep a roof over his head. Still he doesn't sounds like the most easy foal to get along with or that listens well either. Looking forward to the next chapter.
It's almost seems like he can't speak?
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Since its a new body it's likely he just isn't used to it fully. Either that or there is some harmony magic forcing him to hold his tounge.
certainly needs a scrubbing from an editor.
I wonder when he will meat octi
Hey!
I resent that, mate! Not all parts of Australia has overgrown spiders!
The Golden Orb isn't even considered large.
...
It just builds webs out of one of (or that might be THE) strongest forms of spider silk in the world.
I can't wait for the day he's able to speak again.
Oh... Oh God... this so reminds me of that one story... what was it? Something about a human turned colt... smoking ciggs.... Meh.
When in doubt, always blame the cousins
Anyway, it was just the ones with the fancy clothes that acted like that. The naked ones being the perfect models of a decent, just, society. Or 'ponyciety' or whatever.....
ones not once
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See, this guy gets it.
Nice story so far. I'm enjoying it quite a lot! Keep up the good work.
This got me giggling.
Huh, not the exact line of language or speech pattern I was expecting for this guy.
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Found a few mistakes
because I fucking hate there overgrown Spiders.
*their
Anyway thankfully it where just the once with the fancy clothes
*was
I didn’t take me two steps out of the alley
*it
the mare seem to have took my sense of silence
*seemed
For the first time, I will the smartest kid in class
*i will be
LOL
I'm already or I already am.
Real quick: "allot" is not the same as "a lot".
Dunno if this had been mentioned yet.
Oh piddlesticks. That's just the Literary Translation Protocol at work. Is it really so hard to understand that things are translated for the audience they are intended to be paid for by?
Tolkein could have written Lord of the Rings entirely in Elvish. He created enough of the languages (yes, languages) to do so; but then nobody would have been able to read it, so everything was automatically "translated" to English. Heck, Gene Roddenberry could have had Star Trek be entirely in Chinese and Klingon. Nobody would have watched it; China didn't have many TVs in those days, and folks there probably would've thought Shatner looked like a doofus Westerner and changed the channel.
There is some irony in the modern "lingua franca" being English, and not French, but eh. Old news. And it might change over the next century, again, the way things are going.
What will really blow Warfarin-Pon's mind is when I ask this: How sure are you that you're speaking English? Maybe you're actually speaking in the whinnies and neighs and whickers and snorts of Equish, and just don't realize it because your transformation is mental as well as physical, and since you understand everything coming out of everypony's mouth, it just hits your brain as what your brain understands (which may not be English, or anything else besides Equish, anymore). You know, a case of the world being translated for the one intended to be added to it? Existential Crisis Get!
Oh, by the way, props on using "would have" instead of "would of." Saves me a headache from minor concussion brought on by involuntary hoof-meets-face syndrome.
I'm certainly going to enjoy this story I think, It's got potential, and I really like some of your descriptive moments, the use of wit in them it brilliant haha.
I noted that you didn't have an editor for this chapter, If you want I'd be happy to offer to do so for you on a more regular basis?
Food for thought, looking forward to the next one :)
So, he's a five-years-old huh?
Hoo boy.
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Ok then. But others seemed to get it.
Nice job! I only saw one typo where you types there instead of their, but other than that amazing work!
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Oh to be old again?
Hmm, five year old foal should have no problem speaking, already being sufficiently developed physically.
As an example, Pumpkin and Pound Cakes said their first words (Pinkie's name) not very long after being born.
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different vocal chords and mouth, he probably doesn't know how to speak as a pony yet.
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This chapter was horrible. The mug and self- charging tablet makes me cringe, it would be much better to replace the tablet with a few useless things. The constant ranting made me want to scroll through the whole chapter, and I recall something about self-centered asshole care bears.
Hahahahahah, i can't stop laughing!!!
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Why? Its just stranger danger.
Ha! Who's gonna stop the pediphile? You? Your parents? You can't even yell for help.
I am 99% sure that you just write whatever comes to your mind and it turns into a great story automatically