The young Jedi Padawan, Fluttershy has been working along side a Republic crew to rid a sector of the galaxy of pirates. During the trip she meets an old friend and a powerful Jedi who safeguards one of the Order's most cherished artifacts. Things seem to be going along smoothly until a rescue mission aboard a derelict ship turns everything upside down and the Jedi find their abilities, courage and resolve tested.
AU based on Amante's Animations "Duel of the Fates" universe. Set before the animations.
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Nice story vary well written
Where can I watch that?
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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCG2SpaUIsbmZlQsSL__8EtA/videos
I love how people picked up that there was something familiar about Fluttershy's padawan's color scheme.
This was one hell of an awesome way to interpret how she came to be. And the Elements really do resonate with those that are worthy of them.
Absolutely love this! Though I can't help but wonder what Rose got up to afterwards...
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Not sure if I'll write a sequel to this but If I do I can tell you this: Rose is not in a good place mentally when we see her again.
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Yeah, I can imagine. But if a sequel ever does happen, you can bet money that I'll read it!
I have one complaint: the large gaps between paragraphs are unnecessary and make this more difficult to read than it should be, because instinctively a large gap implies that the scene has changed. Use a single blank line between paragraphs, it's fine.
But, that aside, I really enjoyed this. You capture the Star Wars feel very well, I can almost hear the musical cues! And this ties in really nicely with DotF too.
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Thanks for telling me. I'd been posting this directly from my word processor and I must have it set on a different spacing length. May have to go back and edit my other stories as well.
Glad you enjoyed it.
This was a fun read. I really enjoyed Fluttershy as a Jedi here, and seeing your castings for Rose, Sandalwood, Flash and Adagio was entertaining too.
Also, great job with the dramatic content near the end. I really like what you did with Fluttershy, her new apprentice, and with Rose. If you ever get inspired to do a sequel or something with this, I'd definitely follow it!