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Batfan98


Hi, I'm an 18 year old American brony/batman fan with Aspergers

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Batman tries to stop a group of criminals who stole a dimensional transporter. The machine ends up bringing a talking Pegasus filly who Batman takes responsibility for, not only will Scootaloo become Batman's new ward, but also his partner in his war against crime.

Inspired by Batman and Scootaloo's father and daughter like relationship in A Dark Knight For Equestria.

Batman belongs to DC and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro. Rated T for swearing and possible gore. New official version Right here

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This looks interesting. One minor correction I found is you forgot to capitalize Star Labs at the beginning of the story.

A Dark Knight for Equestria is an awesome story! I wonder how Scootaloo will adjust to life on Earth as she is almost alone.

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Well she isn't alone, she has Bruce and Alfred.

You showed your work definitely. From the looks of things The Killing Joke never happened in this universe, so I wonder what other events did and didn't happen?

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Actually The Killing Joke did happen, it just wasn't mentioned yet, but now I just edited it.

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Sweet! Hopefully Scootaloo get to meet Oracle/Barbara Gordon as she is a great example of a disabled superhero!

Is this story called A Dark Knight For Equestria or Gotham City Heroes? I'm confused.

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The relationship between batman and Scootaloo is inspired by their relationship in a dark knight for equestria

What color is Scootaloo's hair now? Also if that picture was summoned couldn't they have sent a letter back explaining the situation?

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As for the first question: her hair is purple. As for the second question: I want it to be a story where everypony in equestria have declared her missing cause I have an idea for an upcoming fanfic...also I never thought of that (Embarrassed grin)

I like her new name! Now I wonder what name she will take Robin or Batgirl?

It's been a week since Scootaloo came to the human world and turned human. When she was turned human her name was changed to Ashlyn Phillips, because her real name was not a normal name on earth, so Bruce decided to give her a human name. She was then publicly adopted as Bruce Wayne's ward.

Which essentially implies becoming the next Joker.:ajbemused:

"I live in a world where there's a bat vigilante in Gotham, a superman flying in Metropolis, a king of Atlantis in the ocean, an Amazon princess in Washington D.C., and more, so what's not to believe?" Lucius explained. That made a lot of sense.

The man's... got a point.

Well that could have gone a lot worse. I think she may regret some of her training as it is very brutal. I hope she will be ready for when she hears what happened to Jason Todd.

Extra point for reference to Lost.

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Not only did Lost Narrator have a cameo, but it was also a 60's style cameo. RIP Adam West.

Yea! She will be a Robin and one of the few female ones. Let's see how she will live up to her predecessors and all the awesomeness they had. Heck she will probably end up becoming a Titan as well.

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She might become a Titan, I'm thinking of having her meet the Teen Titans later.

She read up that Robin was referred to by many as The Boy Wonder, but now that she took the mantle it looks like that would be changed to The Girl Wonder

Bolded letter is needed but otherwise I wonder how the rouge gallery is going to welcome her? I hope Catwomen becomes a good female mentor. Hopefully she can handle the Riddler as she isn't the brightest one. Otherwise it looks like she is going to do fine.

"What does the R stand for?"

So our favourite chicken joke target has evolved into a Robin.:ajsmug:

Catwomen would be great! Let's see how Scootaloo handles her father/boss flirting with an enemy.

All I can say for this chapter is :heart:.

This is funny considering how a certain event will happen between Batman and Catwoman.

She got lucky here with her first encounter with The Joker. I hope Batman will address Scoots’ isssue with being called chicken as that is going to become an issue for her. I wonder who her first other superhero she will meet will be?

"Good evening everyone! It was so nice of me to drop by." Joker said.

Robin gave an annoyed sigh "He's never gonna stop calling me chicken girl, is he?"

The more you let it bug ya, the more he'll do it.

Next stop for Scoots is a little homeschooling Batman style! She is going to need to pickup her smarts to keep pace in Gotham sooner rather then later. Plus she needs more out of costume time to bond with Bruce I think. Still great chapter and I think she has found the one villain in the gallery that will be her own.

hum cough cough this chapter needs looked over for mistakes a little bit.
over all this is a decent story.

She grabbed Riddler by the collar of his short. "Riddle me this, Riddler. Who wears green and thinks he's smart? You." she said as she punched him in the face, knocking him out. She wiped her hands together "Who's stupid now, Riddler?"

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Riddle me this. What swims without floating, splits without breaking and hits hard without making a sound?

a nice little flash back chapter.

Daw that was cute. Wait about how old is Scoots here, I would have pegged her to be middle school aged. Her youthfulness would have been commented on my several of the rouges gallery.

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Ok she is just about to enter middle school then. So she will be out for a bit.

This is why Batdaddy is one of the best dads when he does stuff like this. I wonder why Dick left in this universe and where Tim is as they would have loved to meet their “sister”.

Ah the two mob families of Gotham, they have survived the coming rouges. They are the small fry in Gotham's criminal structure but one that Batman tolerates because he doesn't want any more groups in his city. Better the enemy you know then the one you don't. Also sweet to see Cassandra showing up!

Oh boy, the only villains we have left really is Penguin, Black Mask, Hush, and Bat-Mite. I do wonder how her training is going and how she is making the costume her own? Still the failures among the rouges provided a test for her. Got to save the Demon Head till she is a bit older as Batman would do his best to have her stay behind somewhere safe if he where to show up.

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Other Villains she will be facing off against as well will be The Ventriloquist and Scarface, Salvatore Maroni, The Court of Owls, Poison Ivy, Mr. Freeze, The Ratcatcher, Deadshot, Deathstroke, Victor Zsasz, Cornelius Stirk, Clayface, Firefly, Hugo Strange, The Mad Hatter, Anarky, Solomon Grundy, and Bane. She also faced off against Black Mask already, but she'll face off against him again, this time he'll have dialog.

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Yup her next few years should be interesting. To make things weirder I just remembered Maxie Zeus, he thinks he is the mythological god.

It just makes me wish more people where responding to this story.

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Well I'm glad your commenting, means a lot. ☺

"Really? These are the kind of rogues in town?" Robin asked, in a humored tone. She then laughed.

Not bad, it seems that the Joker isn't aware that Red Hood is the former Robin in this universe or just doesn't care. Hopefully Batman talks to Scootaloo soon about what happened and what has gone on since that event becuase she doesn't have the full picture. Hopefully she can meet her “brothers” soon, if she hasn't met them already, and have some bonding time as Batman is called to a Justice League issue.

Comment posted by Batfan98 deleted Aug 23rd, 2017

To quote Jester/Arkham from Devil May Cry 3: "Zowie! That was close!"

I do wonder how much Jason’s death still weighs on Batman in this universe and how it will effect his relationship with Scoots. I know in the main comics he still cares for Jason but disapproves of his actions as Red Hood after Ra brought him back via the Lazarus Pit.

"No." Batman said, he was too late "No." how could he be too late, he couldn't be too let, Jason can't be dead "NO!!" Batman quickly ran to the wreckage of the warehouse. "JASON!! JASON!!" he searched through the wreckage.

Batman and Robin soon arrived at a resteraunt with the Italian flag on the window, as well as the name: 'Maroni's Italian Restaurant.'.

restaurant

"That we're getten outta the buisness, leaven Gotham." He said.

gettin', leavin'

"I see your lips flabben, Berty, but they ain't making the sound I want to hear.".

flappin'

Penguin pulled out a black umbrella and fired a shot Robin, she fell to the floor. "I'm fine." she said before Batman asked if she was fine.

a shot at Robin

Not a bad chapter, you have a few odd spelling errors in the second and third chapters but over a nice way to introduce Mr. Freeze. Also which lanterns are you using in this story, I would guess at John Stewart but who else among Hal Jordan, Kyle Rayner, Guy Gardner, Simon Baz, and Jessica Cruz? Yes they are all current in the comics to my knowledge but who is to say you haven't created your own.

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