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RainbowSparkle3


Just a massive MLP fan hoping to please you by writing decent fanfiction and reviews.

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Celestia and Twilight were walking together, and while passing through the garden, they came across an old statue of a dark alicorn. Twilight, being the inquisitive little unicorn she was, asked about it, and so Celestia told her about the statue. However, before she could finish, a sudden flash interrupts her, and the sight before her eyes gave Celestia the shock of her life.

An entry into the Nightmare Moon Picture Prompt Contest

Edited and Revised by Fedairkid

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Comments ( 8 )

An interesting little idea if a little rough.
I did cackle when suddenly time-travel

8341809
Haha, yeah, that was supposed to be a shock. Also, I get what you mean by a little rough. There are a lot of unexplored parts, and I'm thinking about writing a sequel/story about the timeline travellers.

Who made the picture?

8347566
Read the description and click on the link. I don't know who made it, but you'll probably find more information there.

Some clever and interesting ideas in here - not an angle I had considered before.
I hope you have the chance to develop your ideas; the timeline travellers theme should be explored further.
Well done!

8375096
Thanks for the kind words, I really appreciate it! :twilightsmile: Also, you're in luck, as I most likely will be writing a long story about the Timeline Travelers after I'm finished Twilight vs Tirek, and if not then, after the story I've been requested to do. :ajsmug:

8375105
I'm pleased you have chosen to develop the timeline travellers concept. Although actively manipulating the time constant has been featured in season 2 episode 20 "It's About Time" and season 5 episodes 25-26 "The Cutie Re-Mark", the concept seems to have been under exploited.
Hope it goes well for you!

8375132
I hope so too. Time travel stories are generally well received on this website, so I have hopes of it getting 1k+ views. :ajsmug:

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