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Majin Syeekoh

"That's how we got Majin, the anthropomorphic personification of Depravity. But he's like Pratchett's Death, where he's wholesome and caring." —RBDash47


This story is a sequel to Electra Complex

Shining Armor is awoken by his daughter bearing a surprise for him.

Shining Armor is wary of surprises from his daughter.

Edited by ChappedPenguinLips (added because I didn’t realize he was joking when he said he didn’t want his name on “a filthy fic of this nature”. Sorry bro.)

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Well seeing as Twilight doesn't have a son, that's a safe bet.

...Not gonna say it.

Majin Syeekoh
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Someone will.:ajsmug:

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"Don't worry about the taste, Daddy! That icing has my love nectar in it~"

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You know, I thought about that, but decided that it was too far.

:rainbowlaugh: And here I was, eagerly anticipating waiting for Shining to say that the icing tasted funny.

Oh Lord, this is so bad (content, not quality) it's amazing. And Christ, Cadance...

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It’s certainly one of my more adventurous works, I’ll admit.

I'll say it. Damnit Syeekoh!

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There it is!:raritystarry:

Well someone had to say it...:trollestia:

Ya just had to go and do it again don't you Syeekoh?

I want to see the interaction of Twilight and Flurry Heart.

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Perhaps one day…:rainbowderp:

at least you didnt have her crawling on the bed while he was eating it.

“I’m just glad we’re at the point where we can be in the room alone.”

Flurry Heart pursed her lips. “Actually, we’re not.”


bro. i lost my shit. damn it cady. a man can only take so much before hes worn down.

Majin Syeekoh
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Yeah, I thought that part was pretty funny too.:twilightsmile:

Imagine being an ephebophile/middle-aged-pony-ophile with an incest kink reading this story.

So frustrated! :fluttercry:

Pardon me I need to go write some unspeakable things now. :trixieshiftright:

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You do you, man.

And I thought the Sparkle family was weird enough.

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It’s never weird enough.

This is singularly creepy, and singularly the most adorable story I've read today. Wonderful job, Majin.

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Adoracreepy… I think that’s a tag on derpibooru.

I’m glad I was able to achieve that.

You are a master of innuendo, by the way.

Majin Syeekoh
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Thanks, brah.

I try.

I thinks it's hilarious that tiny bit of hope Shining has, right before Flurry Heart dashes it. I can almost see him perk up as the story goes on, therapy is going good, she's starting to see the him that exists past her childish hormones and even calling him a nerd, heck, she's even showing some mostly platonic affection! That means she's good, right? Yeah... no, not in the slightest, sorry Shiny. It would be easier if he didn't have a super-attractive daughter, but yeah, fate screwed him there too.

Is it cruel to say his pain brings me great pleasure?

Majin Syeekoh
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It would be, yes, but it doesn’t make it any less pleasurable.

...as his ceiling-wife just announced...

I love the way you phrased this. Many of the lines were very good, but this one in particular was exceptional.

Majin Syeekoh
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I especially liked that line as well.:twilightsmile:

He let out a deep exhale.

"'Exhale' is verb!" :twilightangry2:

Well... they're... a loving family, you can't deny that? :rainbowlaugh:

Majin Syeekoh
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They are a very loving family. No one can deny that.:trollestia:

I bet Twily doesn’t have to go through this.

Cue Spike growing into the buff, studly dragon of his dreams and developing a serious crush on Twilight after she finally grows into her new alicorn body. Pancakes with a side of naked apron may be involved. Because being a Sparkle is suffering.

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Oh my god that’d be awful.:rainbowlaugh:

"Daddy, wake up or I'll smack you."

That's going to be my new greeting for you anytime we speak.

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That's fine as long as you call me daddy. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

The things I wake up to.

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…you know, I was going to say I’ve never heard that before, but then I remembered an instance that I had.

Delightful horrifying.

Also, God help the poor changling who gets in Flurry's cross-hair. God help us all. Amen.

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I don’t want to even think about that.:applejackconfused:

8302795 I kid, mostly. Assume that everyone in this story was just joking around. Yeah, no problems what so ever. :pinkiecrazy:

OK, either this is referencing something or I'm just not getting it.
Either way, the joke went over my head.

Majin Syeekoh
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Very much so, yes.:raritywink:

“Happy birthday. I swear, sometimes you’re as dumb as a sack of bricks.” The scowl was replaced with a wan smirk. “Which makes me wonder what Mom sees in you.”

“Stop being a nerd and eat it.”

Flurry Heart is a goddamn savage

Shining’s gaze followed where the sight of his wife clinging to the ceiling like a spider made him almost choke on his food.

It would of been hilarious (But creepy) if she spun her head 180 degrees like Chrysalis and said "CRYSTALLLSSSSSSSSS" (that just popped into my head, I'm sorry.)
Love this story!

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