This is a second person story. You are the character, plus this is my first fic. If you happen to find anything wrong, it would be appreciative to let me know. You are just a simple pegasus with a roommate that you want to go out with, but you never seem to be able to have the guts to ask her. On one of your nightly walks you come across a stallion who gives you two gala tickets and a possible chance to go on a date with her. But will everything go right, will things just get worse than they already are, or will just about nothing happen with their relationship? And what type of dangers will you come across? This takes place at the last episode of season one: the grand galloping gala
Chapters (6)
903439 Sorry if it offended you in some way, but I see mature as sex, gore, or anything that involves with stuff like that. The only thing I put in there was some bad language and a few hits on the main character and I believed that to be teen. But if bad language counts as mature then I'll see about getting the rating changed.
903457 I dunno, I was just shocked at first.
903463... Well we both have our different versions of what teen rating could mean.
This is good.
When it says "As friends." I could only imagine metal gear death screen with the word "FRIENDZONED" instead of "GAME OVER"
Awesome story I really liked it. Keep up the great work!
Keep Moving Forward
A story made out of only OC's and is in 2nd person?
I AM THE LUCKIEST STALLION EVER.
Hmm, this sure looks...
interesting.
Funny. I really liked the sick fetishes part, though.
1103394 I became a bit more sane and looked back and realized "What the fuck was I thnking" because you don't come across many people who actually like this.
1104178 I thought that it and the "TIMMY, NO!" part were really funny, but maybe it was because it may have been 3 in the morning.
1105240 "What kind of name is Timmy?"
I loved writing that part.
Yay! I get to beat the living shit out him!
1242662 Don't celebrate just yet bro. I got something special planned for this.
RIP HIS DICK OFF AND SHOVE IT DOWN HIS THROAT!
1244681
Well that escalated quickly.