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Coldfire Hart

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Timelines crisscross and sometimes converge. Other times, they run parallel to each other.

For one filly, Nightfall has only ever wanted to know what a mother's love feels like but when every attempt ended in failure, she looked at the moon and wished upon it.

Unbeknownst to her, her plea was heard by Starlight Glimmer. And with a single decision, she and several others will become entangled in a world where one timeline can cross over into another.

Many thanks to these awesome peeps for helping me out!

Berry Delight

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 6 )

Ooooooh. Very interesting so far. I'm interested to see where this will go. Can't wait until the next chapter! :D

Well, thank you so much!
I hope the next chapter(s) to drop soon will keep that going!
Stay tuned! :raritywink:

If Nightfall was voiced, what would she sound like?

Hm. Good question. Since beginning this story and Nightfall herself, I imagine her sounding something like Sweetie Belle, but not as confident or outgoing (so somewhere between Sweetie and Marble Pie), or Coco Pommel

Whatever your mother has done to you, I swear I will beat some sense into her. Bonbon thought to herself as she cradled Nightfall and started to sing a lullaby to her.

Aww, how... sweet... I hate myself... :P

“Oh nothing, Bons.” Lyra played it off and quickly turned back around. “Never thought you had a sweet side,” she giggled.

Ayy! I'm not the only one! XD

Nice little chapter! Very cute. Like it a lot! :D

LOL! Hate yourself, why? Hahaha!
What? You didn't think she had a sweet side either? LOL!
I'm glad you really liked chapter 4. It means a lot to me since it did exactly what I wanted it to do as I wrote it.

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