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David Silver


Crazy stallion that made Ponyfinder, because Ponies make everything better, D&D included.


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You are on the way to work/school/etc when you see a pony. What do you do? This is a choose your own adventure of the true variety, with all the choices laid out and waiting for you to finish.

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Comments ( 51 )

Neat! :twilightsmile:

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Did you arrive here organically, or did you read them all?

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Through em all, I've read. I love these things and I went crazy zippity zip zip through em. :)

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Glad you liked them!

The purple and red pony gives a flip of her, you're pretty sure it's a her, trichromatic bane, a blue bang moving to reveal its pointed horn to view.

Ah. I found the path the typos chose to follow.

Corrected:

The purple and red pony gives a flip of her—you're pretty sure it's a her—trichromatic mane, a blue bang moving to reveal its pointed horn to view.

I'd really consider just eliminating that terminal "to view" as redundant after "reveal," but that's just me being picky.

happy with this ending. don't need to look further!

*blinks* Buh? Spitfire's a unicorn now?

:rainbowlaugh: Guess the Wonderbolts need a new captain, pronto!

Also, awww. :fluttercry: Poor pony...

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Oops, that should be Starfire, fixed.

Huh. I ended up in Equestria as a pony on my first run. I did go through and take all the other runs too. The bad ends are amusing :rainbowlaugh:

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It was meant to be!

Not a bad ending.

at first we worried that CYOA was a banned format, but after checking they either relaxed the rule or the blog post was disappeared.
Anyways, what fun! It's a small tree, but truly massive ones tend to get rather weird depending on how many branches down you go, not to mention the difficulty of keeping all the paths relatively straight...
Keep going! ;)

well, you found her. Was it worth it? :trixieshiftleft:

Hmmm, but that it would be unlikely they would dedicate an officer to house arrest you just for being curious.

Not only a captured pony, but a potentially gender bent one at that! But hey, unicorn master race, right?

portable gateways they said. Go anywhere they said. Now look at you! Stuck in a cartoon! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by David Silver deleted July 16th

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The police officer was not there specifically to watch you, though that was a positive side effect. They just happened to park a car there to send a subtle message while the officer was working on other things.

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So far as I knew, the ban was on unfinished CYOA. I wrote the whole thing out in a flurry, avoiding that problem.

i loved those choose your own adventures! my favorite was The Dragons' Den. I'll definitely read this at some point.

Dude, I was wondering about doing a story like this the other day. I see you beat me to it. :rainbowlaugh: Nice job. :rainbowdetermined2:

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It was a fun exercise in planning before writing for a change.

Having explored the whole decision tree, I return to my first ending to comment. All told, I definitely ended up with one of the better ones.

A lovely little CYOA. Thank you for it.

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Glad you liked it! Some endings are far worse for sure.

Well, I just did what I'd do.

Huh.

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This is because you are the bestie best, clearly.

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You know, you'd think that more people would make that joke.

But, apparently not.

Damn, I thought I did the right thing... Anyway, awesome story, and the way you choose the ending is amazing!

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So true, although it's Equestria: can't complain too much!

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Glad you enjoyed your journey. Did you explore the others?

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Yeah, I took the time to mark them down, but I actually got through them all! You, my good sir, are one creative being.

Back at it again I see? This is (hopefully) going to be good!

Only two choices in and I've already screwed up. Or is this just the neutral ending? Only one way to find out!

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This is... wait, that's spoilery territory isn't it?

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I will find all of them David. Every. Single. One.

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I agree with the below.

Pegasus master race

Oh, I do like this ending. But the others...they call for me.

It would appear that I've read all the endings​. In my opinion, only two of them could be considered "good"

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This is the natural state of CYOA stories.

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Yup. I think you did a good job of making one. Definitely not the best, but still worth an upvote.

I really enjoyed this! I used to read these books all the time when I was a kid, so it hit all the right nostalgia buttons. To the point I featured it on episode 189 of my podcast, Pony 411.

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Glad you liked it. I'll give it a listen.

ended on 1b1 Din't feel like it supposed to be bad end, somehow telling her her about television show feels too corny

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It was a lukewarm ending. It coulda been much worse.

Awesome. I went through all the options, my fave by far is telling her of MLP and then joining her.

This one is cute, getting turned into a saddle for your seemingly hostile intent, but she keeps you. Regret?

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