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Fylifa


Just a silly, glowing changeling OC that likes stories that involve ponies kissing, as well as 'other' things.

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Twilight Sparkle is hit with a curse with a very particular solution. She has to race the clock to find that special somepony who is just right.

Breaking a kissing curse should be easy with so many princesses around...




* Teen for Kissing, just kissing—
* —so much kissing though, you don't even know. I am actually kinda embarrassed by how much there is of it.
* Many thanks to ClanCrusher for his editing help!
* Set sometime in Season 6

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 31 )

You weren't kidding on the amount of kisses there was in this story. It was quite a trip reading this, and I'm glad to have read it. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for putting up with my Kiss-a-thon :)

I LOVE the ending. Perfectly Twilight way to evade a question.

This story is Extremely Good and I want to thank the author for bringing it into all our lives. Smoochfic is the new clopfic, nobody should write anything else again.

Came for the pony smooching, was not disappointed. :rainbowlaugh:

Okay it's official Twilight Sparkle turns everything off including romance.

This fic was great but it's left me wanting some smooches now. :rainbowkiss:

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Fluttershy: *smallvoice* Yay~

And thanks for the kind words! I am glad I got a laugh, brought a smile and struck a few heartstrings too with you~

Rarilight and Twiluna are fun pairings and your idea makes me giggle with its sit-com potential. Those two would be easy for Twi to mix up in the dark on voice alone. As the idea that the lingering effects of the curse isn't some magical thing. But rather all her friends now think of Twilight romantically. Oh no.. how... terrrrrrible.

I kept thinking it would turn out she had to kiss a frog. Oh well, fun little story.

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Actually... that is a genius idea. I’d have totally gone with that if I wasn’t so caught up writing pony smoochin >.<

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I was even more sure when Discord got involved. Even anticipated angry Twilight and sheepish Discord!

Ahaha...yes...
:trollestia:

I started reading this hoping it would be hilarious and full of well-written kisses. I was not disappointed. In fact, this was far better than I expected; it was absolutely hilarious and the actual maker of the book was perfect.

A follow-up with a Twilight-centered love hexagon (Luna Applejack Rainbow Rarity Pinkie Fluttershy) would be brilliant, if you have the time.

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Aww! Thanks for all the sweet words <3 Really glad you liked it!

I've have a few ideas that is close to what you suggest~ I'll probably save it for a milestone if this ever reaches a hundred upvotes :)

It's pretty rare that a story makes me laugh out loud. This one managed it multiple times! Kudos to the Author for a very well written, very funny and perfectly in character story. Thanks.

This was a very sweet story :twilightsmile:

I like how it managed to keep that atmosphere and yet still have some threat behind it with what might happen to Twilight. And I liked Discord being in-character without being too zany and taking over everything. Luna was well-balanced as a virgin without being too shy about it, and I liked Applejack's pragmatic approach to it. Cadence admitting she'd already given it her best shot was a fantastic moment.

More than anything I liked how different each of the kisses were; the premise is one that could have got old quickly, but you mixed it up enough each time to keep it fresh :twilightsmile:

O. M. G.

This was the best! :heart::heart::pinkiehappy:

I absolutely nearly died from cuteness overload! And those kisses!

DAAAAAAAANG!!!!:pinkiehappy:

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Eeee you are such a sweetheart. I am glad you enjoyed so much :twilightblush:

She brought the book close for a testing sniff and guessed a hundred or so years.

Huh. You did call it. Nice.

Adorable from start to finish, yet still carrying some great dramatic tension. And I can't help but notice that Pinkie never actually gave an excuse for leaving at the end...

:pinkiehappy: "I see where you're going with this. Lemme do some quick back-of-the-cupcake-wrapper calculations and I'll have definitive proof bright and early!"

Thank you for a most enjoyable read. (Though you should probably stick to "Darling" when it comes to Rarity's terms of endearment. When she calls ponies "Sweetie," it sounds like she thinks they're her ssiter in disguise.)

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Huh. You did call it. Nice.

Hey. I still don't hold a candle to the master of precog though. :raritywink:

Though you should probably stick to "Darling" when it comes to Rarity's terms of endearment...

Of course how could I forget Ocellus' masterful impersonation. You don't really need any other words really. She's like a fabulous Pikachu Darlingchu


I am happy you gave it a read and enjoyed! Means a lot! Not just to get my kissyfic upvoted, But I now almost have a comment on every story of mine from you. Do I get a free FoME combo meal after the sixth?

Or better yet. gimmie a kiss-related Magic card~

Dear Princess Celestia,

I am not a frog.

Your faithful student in all things, Twilight Sparkle

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That's pretty good, I wish I thought of it and put it as a tiny epilogue :twilightsheepish:

After Terms and the comet story, this was somewhat lighter than I thought it would be. The other two were very emotional and sometimes profound, while this is more... fluffy, I guess? Maybe the lack of a drama tag here should've clued me in on that sooner. But that's not a complaint at all. This was still a very entertaining story with a fun premise which managed to remain fresh for the whole twelve thousand words, even despite doing the standard thing of Twilight having a scene with each of the main characters in sequence. You even included Discord! And if I haven't said it before already, I really do like your descriptive prose. So it's pretty good all around. Thank you, again, for writing this.

Cadance grinned. “It’s just like when we were younger! You remember when we used to practice during sleepovers, don’t you?”

UH

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"Or when we went over how to play spin the bottle!"
"It was always weird to play that game with just the two of us."

The idea of Twlight hunting down Chrysalis, popping out of some bush in whatever secret lair she's in and kissing Chrissy before anypony realises what's going on is hilarious.

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