Yalbach
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Ouch.
I take it y'all didn't like it?
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I'd say it's partially because this story is a massive tease that gives zero payoff. If you add in the actual stuffing sequence or some sex at the end it'd be better objectively, although doing both and splitting this into two chapters at the respective "climaxes" would probably be best, it's also a lot to do.
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I'll try to fix those issues in my next story, I guess.
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Oh sweet, you brought this back.
. I know I didn't say it in my previous comment, but it is a genuinely good story and I'm glad to see it returned to the shelves.
If you ever need a hand just send me a PM, I'm always happy to help pre-read/edit.
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Yeah, I decided that I won't let the downvotes control me. Instead, I'll just write what I like
Great story and great compromise at the end. Keep it up and don't get discouraged.
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I'll try my hardest to not.
Well okay so I took a peek at this as it seemed the most benign. I don't really see anything wrong with it objectively, it was cutesy and light hearted and a bit steamy at the end, which is all fine but I was a tad squeamish while reading just cuz it really isn't my cup of tea.
I was hoping there would be an actual stuffing part as that would be the most enjoyable for me personally but oh well. So yeah I really can't find any logical reason to hate this, and I CERTAINLY can say its not the worst thing I've read on this site. Oh no. Not even close.
A sunburst x thunder lane ship plus anthro...rare & cool. to the people down vote or just hate - What's your deal with body shaming on a pony fic! we'll living in a time where the world is going mad over really stupid president(I have no political views what so ever!) isn't my little pony: friendship is magic about love & tolerance(I know the show has changed a lot since it's start & are some things have happen in this fandom.) but accept others for who they are even in writing fan fics! To yalbach- you're awesome writer, don't let others bring you down in future stories:) p.s: there's a couple of fat shining armor(he gets flash sentry into it too!) fics can't remember the author right now....anyways just wanted to say my peace on your story & see ya!