• Member Since 19th Feb, 2015
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Spiral Drake


I'm just a guy that like's to write

Comments ( 14 )

Grammar issues in the summary, to say nothing of this...plot. Thanks for the forewarning though.

8711219
you wont let up on anybody will ya?

8711219
do you ever let up on new writers? In fact, before you decide you have the right to comment on other people's works grammar, you should have your own work for people to criticize.

8711314
Literally, who are you?

8712111
*In fact,
*...people's grammar,...

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8712396
just start linking grammarly to new writers saying its an ok replacement for an editor

Like I said on your last one man you're doing a good job I like to cancel that you're going through having an older protagonist in that has been on the planet for more than a thousand years taking on more of a mentor rental type of roll especially when it has the whole Kaman Rider or Power Ranger type concept behind it so I do say keep up the good work man

10296231
thanks for the comment and if you want to know more about the rider in question that seems to be acting like a mentor. You can see more about him from my story here

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

I know what you reference for the head scientist. but I can't remember the Noam of the comic

11375930
in all honesty here. If it is somewhat like a character from elsewhere it was not intentional when they were designed.

I'm unsure as to which one you mean though

11423777
so i complaty for get about it till you massage i have found the one i was thanking of but i dont know if i can link it so i will jest send it to you

11423964
if you drop it to me in a PM I wouldn't mind seeing what ya meant

11423976
it should be in your massages as link reference

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