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Nugget


"Hi! I'm Nugget, and I'm your friend to the end. Haydeeho! Ha ha ha!"

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Bright Mac and his son, Big Mac, were as close as any father-son could be. However, as time went on, Big Mac began to grow an attitude towards his father over matters that Bright Mac can't understand. Clueless as to what is going on, Bright Mac writes down in his journal the events of which transpire as he tries to figure out what the heck is going on with his son.


Edited by tommal
Based on the story "Father Son Conversation"

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

I think you should have gone with 'Buttercup' for Pear Butter's name, but other than that, a nice story about how important setting time for family is.

This was cute. A nice happy ending.

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Thank you for the kinda words. I always love to put meaning to my short stories.

It's nice, but like 8274394 said, "Buttercup" would have made more sense. Nice job though.

This story conveys such a strong message. Big mac wanted to buy some time from his dad! Heartbreaking!

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