I've been a Pokémon fan for a while now. And by how much I play it, you'd correctly guess that I was addicted to it.
But all that changed, as one night, while I was sleeping, someone decided I wasn't good enough in my world anymore, so they turned me into a fennekin, and then just dumped me out into a land of magical, talking ponies.
Perfect! (That's sarcastic, by the way.)
(I don't own this cover art, so I don't take credit for making it. Also, criticism is welcomed)
(Story now cancelled to work on other projects)
Chapters (2)
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Keep up this interesting story :-)
I like the story so far, Lad. Guess our little furry friend here learn Ember already. Anyway, keep up the good work. Cheers.
Remember, Fennekin can learn flame charge, which is basically "i'm on fire and can levitate"
with a bit of practice, you can probably fly.
they can also learn Grass knot, which means Florikinisis, they can learn to create toxic liquids, and has two ways of creating clones, possibly solid and fully autonomous clones..
Uh ember. You know the first fire type move anything learns.
you dont see to many stories about fenikin good for you dude
Not a bad story so far. Would have been a bit more interesting whne he couldn't talk to the Ponies, but that's ok. Looking forward to more^^
Fennikin was a nice starter, but i wish that delphox and braixen had different male/ female forms.
Gotta learn ember before you can get to flame thrower. Glad you brought that up instead of going straight into the more powerful fire type moves
Please continue.
Keep it up this story has grabbed my attention!
You have caught my attention
Decent start. Could use a grammar and spelling nazi to copyediting.
slightly dissapointed because the guy turned pokemon could talk already (I just prefer them needing to figure it out themself.
Alright. So, to be honest, I left out a few things in this chapter, and I didn't explain events the way they needed to be explained.
To be honest I'm kind of glad that there is no "he woke up at home feeling like shit" background so far, mostly because it doesn't matters later anyway. However please tell me that he is in his own and not in that Arceus universe.
I would love it if is just about him figuring out Ponyville again and not a "786 or whatever pokemon in Equestria with more main chars than an author can probably handle" story.
Well the story is nice anyway, I just imaged it would be like the one I had read a while back, where Fluttershy or the CMC would find her/him and thinking of him as a pet as first before (hopefully after 4-5 chapters only), they would figure out that he doesn't exactly counts as a pet.
This is great please continue it!
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Glad you like it so far
Also, what do you mean about Arceus Universe, because I think there are several kinds out there. Are you possibly talking about a New World, a New Way (or something like that)?
To sorta answer your question about that, I really don't plan this to be like some side story to a bigger one, because I just don't like the idea of it. I also originally made this story to be displaced, but decided against it.
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I like that answer
I hope a new chapter comes out soon
daww this was a sweet chapter
hmm...
you can earn your keep by Incinerating garbage?
Were you trying to say "Couch" or "Coach"?
Either way, nice work on the new chapter, lad. Cheers.
This was adorable.
How sweet
That was nice but he seems a bit bossy or rather he likes to play the smart one I think.
Wasn't he thinking she got a family, or was it because of him seeing her with the chickens?
Well it was nice enough and near enough to what I hoped for.
Interesting so far... some things doesn't make sense, but I won't question it in favor to the plot...
yeah... I can see what laziness can do to a story (my only fiction is the proof of that)
up voting and watching for not being a generic HiE and having an interesting story so far.
hope it continues interesting.
I like it so far, but please.... please don't fall into a pattern of having your character well out the names of their moves. If your character needs to use his abilities try and describe the effects don't just say "Wildfire used flamethrower on the pack of timberwolves" It annoys me to end that often crossovers do this. In the show no one yells the name of the spell they are casting. Rainbow Dash does not yell "sonic rainboom" when she performs her signature move. so please (with a cherry on top) don't have your character do this trope.
Sorry about the mini rant. I like the story so far and look forward to read more.
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Yes, this is often an ender for me. It's not the pokemon game, this is a story. In a story you describe, not play.
OMFG THAT IS SO CUUUTE
Potential is here
when will you continue this story?
Annnnnd dead
Why must the good story’s die
when are you going to continue this? i liked it
hay do more chapters
It was really good story pls update
oi do more chapters I like this story
