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Not bad it's a shame that the story doesn't have more views.
The only problem i see with this fic, is that there are some writing errors in the form of words being redundant and some sentences with commas missing...
i don't normally leave comments on unfinished stories until i get to the 'end'...but i'm liking it thus far
Hacen caso de no ir con extraños pero entran a un bosque lleno de monstruos
I like the story but it makes no sense that the children decided to go to a forest knowed for being infested with monsters but decided that a stranger helping them get home was to much for them
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It's the CMC. These girls could give DISCORD a run for his money on his BEST days. Why are you surprised.
This story is quite underrated.....
Ah, a language barrier it seems, definitely will complicate things. Poor CMC though, had to be pretty terrifying to encounter that.