Hmm, a pretty good chapter, but it felt like the rapists went a little light on Applejack compared to Rarity, and I would've expected the rapist mare to get off using a ring-gag on AJ rather than masturbation.
8369270 I agree, Dash next. Wonderbolts seem to be an obvious choice... too obvious... wait, you already said there'd be a bit with Rainbow Dash and the CMC.
I have a feeling I know and suspect who those three intruders could have been. The two stallions could have been Rarity's neighbors, Lucky Clover, and Caramel. As for the mare, I think it was either Lyra Heartstrings, or Sweetie Drops (or Bon Bon as the fandom calls her).
8375398 I'm sorry, I somehow missed this comment when it was first posted. I already did a recent Pinkie chapter, so I'll leave her be for now. Why Redheart though? That's an interesting choice of rapist.
8420147 Her caretaking attitude could be a front for her wicked side. Something about someone being extremely nice up front but having a hidden evil personality is usually interesting.
8431600 Don't worry, Twilight's time is coming soon. I've started the next chapter and it is a Rainbow Dash chapter though. I will give Twilight her unwanted time in the spotlight as soon as I have a good idea for her.
well atleast that ended on a happy note, the mare surprised me just goes to show you anyone can be a rapist be them stallion mare colt or filly.
Hmm, a pretty good chapter, but it felt like the rapists went a little light on Applejack compared to Rarity, and I would've expected the rapist mare to get off using a ring-gag on AJ rather than masturbation.
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I agree, Dash next. Wonderbolts seem to be an obvious choice... too obvious... wait, you already said there'd be a bit with Rainbow Dash and the CMC.
Pinkie chloroformed by nurse Redheart and sold off to slavers?
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Yes, but Dashie won't be the victim in that one.
8369270
Dashie it is then
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I liked the idea of the rapists having their own kinks. The mare liked forced orgasm.
I have a feeling I know and suspect who those three intruders could have been. The two stallions could have been Rarity's neighbors, Lucky Clover, and Caramel.
As for the mare, I think it was either Lyra Heartstrings, or Sweetie Drops (or Bon Bon as the fandom calls her).
Am I right, theponycaptorproject?
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I didn't have anypony in particular in mind, so if that's who you want it to be, go for it.
8382308
I see. Well, it's only a suspicion, nothing more. I guess it could've been anypony. LOL!
HERE COME DAT RAPE
OH SHIT WADDUP
What is wrong with me....
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I'm sorry, I somehow missed this comment when it was first posted. I already did a recent Pinkie chapter, so I'll leave her be for now. Why Redheart though? That's an interesting choice of rapist.
8420147
Her caretaking attitude could be a front for her wicked side. Something about someone being extremely nice up front but having a hidden evil personality is usually interesting.
8420597
Hm, I'll have to keep that in mind. Maybe something happens to a pony during a checkup
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Looking forward to it!
Twilight plsss
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Don't worry, Twilight's time is coming soon. I've started the next chapter and it is a Rainbow Dash chapter though. I will give Twilight her unwanted time in the spotlight as soon as I have a good idea for her.
8431637
Oh, okay
8431637
Tentacles?
Yeah, don't like that part - non-con is great, and I like it when the "bad guys" win.
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I do too, but I wanted to try a different ending this time