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Cloudhammer


I never make mistakes. I thought I'd made one once, but I was wrong.

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While Discord was busy terrorizing Equestria and tormenting Twilight and her friends, his power ran rampant throughout the world, twisting rabbits into monsters, flipping day and night at random...

Making a particular farmpony bonkers and think he was a dog.

This is what the story neglected to mention.

Set during Season 2, approximately around Hearth's Warming Eve. Rated Teen for a lot of implications. Proofread by Pascoite.

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Alright, so I get that Mac had an... *ahem* "affair" with Winona, but I don't see how Gummy fits into it...

Wait.

"Fits into it."

Ohhhhhhhhhhh...

Too bad it's complete. I was kind of hoping Winona would try to get Fluttershy and Discord's help in turning her into a Mare.

Oh my God. Why tho?

Upvoted.

Some of the implications are rather displeasing, and the tonal shift at the end is quite abrupt, but the punchline still makes this work to a surprising degree. Plus, the parts written from a canine persoective are quite well done.

Still, given what we've seen of Gummy's thought process, I can only imagine what he thinks of this situation.

Best of luck in the judging.

I'm not sure I get all of the end but I get enough of it. I'm all for Gummy and Winona. And for a short while I was for Big Mac and Winona, until Lesson Zero. A fun story no matter what.

I'm ashamed to say I ship it.

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