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Natedogg2006


I've never called myself a brony, now I'm writing mlp fanfiction and enjoying it.

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Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash have been training together ever since almost letting their friends down in yet another world ending event. One day however they end up in a compromising position, what follows is... nothing. Followed immediately by the most backwards hook up in equestrian history.

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Comment posted by Natedogg2006 deleted Nov 22nd, 2017

Dude . . your and you're < = please fix that.

Stahlseele
Gah!!!!! Thought I got all those, where did you find it?

To be honest - this had me rolling with laughter. Those two are adorable! No, wait - they're awesome! No, wait - they're... huh... adorsome? :rainbowlaugh:

Oh gosh, was that cute...
What an enjoyable ride. I think you captured them perfectly. I was laughing, I was grinning, I was smiling and I was feeling all fluffy and nice for a while. It's a crime that this story is as underrated as it is.

Thank you so much for writing. :twilightsmile:

9035382
Thanks so much for you comments and the fav. I mostly do this for fun and as a form of stress relief, people liking what I do is just a nice bonus. I'm not worried so much about ratings, just as long as people like you get some enjoyment out of it.

9035458
Well, in that case: MLP is a safe haven for me. I have times when I barely read anything for a year or so, and when I return, I read and read and read. I read to flee, to get my mind off of things. To have something nice, for a change. Feel less miserable.
Thus, 'enjoyment' might actually be an understatement.

9035467
Glad to help then. BTW we have favs in common. Maybe, come to think of it I don't know if I ever fav'ed sun salutation, but I did like it.

9035486
A weird ship - not in a negative way -, but I liked the writing style and it turned out quite nicely. And Treehugger needs some love. (And characterization other than 'she's totally a stoned hippie'.)

Thanks so much for finally getting this up to 400 views everyone:twilightsmile:

I love the way the chapter ended. It was very funny and I can't wait to read the next chapter. You did a good job with AJ.

9443727
I tried to keep their personalities like in the show. I've seen way to many fics where they act so spastic and awkward when they get together. Some awkwardness works, but they are fundamentally not awkward characters. Whether or not I managed I'm glad you liked it.

I really liked the dynamic at the end and it was a well written ending. Thank you for the interesting story.

-Coco the Bearded :twilightsmile:

Finally got the 500 view milestone. I'm happy, I still like this story. Thanks everyone.

This is my fifth story to hit a thousand views. Thanks so much everyone.

"..... I think we just started datin' on a dare."

:rainbowlaugh:

10874798
And they'd never break up out of spite.:ajsmug: I think this was my first successful attempt to bring the characters personalities from the show across. Thanks for checking it out.

Should have picked a shorter to read in the middle of the night....

I regret nothing...

And what a nice proposal :twilightsmile:

10874811gotta say you did a really good job of bringing them out and make them feel in character the whole time...

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