This was a nice story, thanks for writing it

Good.

Glad to read this sequel till the end! Loved the first one and now love this one. Hope one day there could be a continuation of Hunter, Moondancer and Lightning’s story but for now, I’ll wait.

Can’t wait to see what else you have ready to write! See you then. :3

Now this was very interesting and good to read
When I first saw it is thought it as another 'normal' clopfic
But now that I've read both stories I found them interesting and great to read
Hope to see either a sequel or another story like this

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If you liked this, then please check out all the other Clocktower Stories

Amazing! I adored the connection they formed, and Lightning added such a different personality that Moondancer really could bounce off of. This was such a fun read, and I can’t wait for more!

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Next idea in the works will be about Lightning being a test subject for some of Moondancers kinky lab experiments

That was awesome! I look forward to more juicy stories like this.

Hello!

I have finally reviewed your story. I apologize for the delay. We've changed things up a little bit in the café, where each of our reviews has its own thread, and you're able to post comments and stuff. This is to encourage open discussion with everyone and to build a more close-knitted community.

As always, thank you for the time, effort, and hard work you have put into the creation of this story, and I hope that you find this review to be at least somewhat helpful to you.

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/357754/hunters-catch-by-brony-wan-kenobi

This one ends nice. Hunter basicly ends up with an angel Twilight and Devi RD.

Altruth the moment when Dust forged the signature.
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I really liked this story and the prequel as well. I'm kinda borderline with the bdsm, not sure I like it, not sure I hate it--but it is fun to read.

I do have a question. If the mares' pussies are facing downward, how are they sharing the dildo without it falling out or being awkward? Wouldn't the dildo be a U shape?

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Its a bending dildo,

That's for reading. Be sure to check out the next one

Very nice Story enjoyed it very much.

Man I'm going to hell aren't I.

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Why?

I don't like bondage but i still like the story for everything else. I just wish people could follow the basic idea that just because you don't like an element of a piece of art doesn't mean it is bad art.

Personally I thought the story was better than the clop though that might just be my personal preferences. Also the extra white lines between paragraphs is very annoying.