As Hunter continues his relationship with his sub, Moondancer, within the kink society a new mare enters the picture. Will Hunter be able to help a friend? Will he be able to catch a mare that moves like lightning?
My compliments, as good as the first one. There are a few typos here and there (need a proofreader? You already know what I'm capable of), but nothing hugely distracting or disorienting. I can't wait to see where this one goes. Oh, and as to the mango thing, I prefer pineapples, and on my Tumblr, I saw a character sheet (re-shared it on mine) of a nox pony who's favorite fruit is durians.
Oh, and you inspired me to write down some of my head canon about nox ponies (bat ponies, thestrals, etc), Hollow Shades and the Lunar Guard, just poke my blog here if you want to see that.
This is a living example of the phrase "sex sells" while it's great and all, a lot of top stories are sex related, . This is in no way meant to be offensive and certainly not to say your work is bad... it's just frustrating to see sex Everywhere, how can you possibly sell a story if most writers -as long as there's sex involved- don't even need to try as hard...
YES, YES, YES, YES, All my yes here!!! I do have one question, what in Equestria was that one foal doing to get that cutie mark? I hope you never stop writing, such good content.
one thing I picked out
all of the members there had catch their own subs on Predator’s Night
Love this series
Darn you Moondancer! You made my...wings stiff
YES IT HAS RETURNED!
how did you get cover art so damn fast xD
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Manifest made it.
Not complaining, but there's three lightning dust stories in the featured box.
My compliments, as good as the first one. There are a few typos here and there (need a proofreader? You already know what I'm capable of), but nothing hugely distracting or disorienting. I can't wait to see where this one goes. Oh, and as to the mango thing, I prefer pineapples, and on my Tumblr, I saw a character sheet (re-shared it on mine) of a nox pony who's favorite fruit is durians.
Oh, and you inspired me to write down some of my head canon about nox ponies (bat ponies, thestrals, etc), Hollow Shades and the Lunar Guard, just poke my blog here if you want to see that.
This is a living example of the phrase "sex sells" while it's great and all, a lot of top stories are sex related, . This is in no way meant to be offensive and certainly not to say your work is bad... it's just frustrating to see sex Everywhere, how can you possibly sell a story if most writers -as long as there's sex involved- don't even need to try as hard...
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You could turn off mature stories in the settings if you are looking for stories that are good but not sex related.
Yay! A look at dom and sub in the mundane of everyday life. Been waiting a long time for this.
YES, YES, YES, YES, All my yes here!!!
I do have one question, what in Equestria was that one foal doing to get that cutie mark?
I hope you never stop writing, such good content.
one thing I picked out
Shouldn't that be caught not catch?
>>Sees the midchapter image
THAT'S WHAT I CALL DINNER!!!