After so long of thinking, planning, and worrying, Rumble has finally worked up the courage to ask out his crush Flitter out on a date. While thinking about what could happen, worrying about being rejected, Rumble tries to think of the positive. He thinks of Flitter's lovely smile, gentle eyes, lovely body, and above all else, her beautiful hooves.
Contains: Hoof worship
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Perfect.
The story could use a proofreader, but other than that I enjoyed reading it. It was a little... strange, shall we say, at certain points, but I suppose those moments were part of the unique premise.
Love the ending especially.
100 muffins says it was a dream, cause you got to think...it's like a 10 year old having a crush on his 22 or 23 year old babysitter and kisser her as she kisses back without realizing that she's kissing a child
It's a fetish I can get used to, and Flitter is as cute and amicable as I expected. Lovely little story.