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Sandstorm94


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This story is a sequel to The Day When Discord Went Down to Sweet Apple Acres...


Everypony far and wide had come to know about the legendary fiddle player Applejack's win over Discord, and she had the fiddle to prove the win. All the while, Discord had been fuming in the pits of Tartarus trying to think of a way to take down his foe once and for all. Now, 10 years later, he is back and is ready to push Applejack to her limit.

Based on the song "The Devil Went Back Down to Georgia" by the Charlie Daniels Band. All rights to the song go to them and I make no money off of this.
*EDIT:the song was actually put on Mark O'Conner's album "Heroes".

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Oh, this was glorious! I knew this idea had merit when you posed it to me, but this is truly awesome. Although I should correct you on the rights issue, the song was actually put on Mark O'Conner's album "Heroes".

Okay... In my... excitement for lack of a better word my reviewer persona may have dropped by accident. Looking back it now, there are several issues. For one thing, everything seems to happen way too fast. For example, you could have gone more into depth when Applejack was practicing her fiddle playing and gone into Applejack's emotions a bit more. Secondly, you probably could have included her sister a bit more, given how much of a prominent character she was in the original. Thirdly, the rest of the Mane Six showing up out of nowhere and Pinkie's referee moment to explain everything just seems a bit... jarring along with the Mane Six singing a bit of the song as well. Your mileage may vary on that last one, but that's my opinion.

Well it was actually nice to see a sequel to Brick's fic based on the song "The Devil went Down to Georgia", since this song as an actual sequel, but it's kind of.. meh.

Don't get me wrong, it wasn't bad, this line "Scootaloo's in the clubhouse kneading dough" did make me laugh, since I know the original lyrics, but it wasn't that great either.

Here are some mistakes I spotted.

Granny passed last June,but give me

*space missing*

he was in for the fight offer life

of her

eternity...to prove

*space missing*

Also the last paragraph is all in underline.

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