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Revenant Wings


"The world is a looking-glass, and gives back to every man the reflection of his own face." - William Makepeace Thackeray, Vanity Fair. Admin of LGBT, somewhat obsessed with Crash Bandicoot.

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Whether it's a drink or a slice of locally made apple pie, the Salt Block Saloon in Appleoosa is the place to go. Come on down, have a local cider or imported bourbon or whiskey, and relax with music and entertainment in the company of a few good friends.

Or, if you don't have any friends, you're likely to make a new one by the time you leave.


Starts after S1's "Over a Barrel", will eventually progress through S7's "The Perfect Pear" unless a new western episode comes out.

M/M Braeburn x Sheriff Silverstar.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

That was an enjoyable first chapter. I especially liked the chemistry between Braeburn and Silverstar, their interactions throughout the first chapter showing that their relationship will likely blossom into something more meaningful, which is fitting for the romance tag. The relaxed tone was great at setting up the story's introduction, setting the tone for their conversations and the possible struggles they may face later on. The only problem I had with the story was that the introductory paragraphs felt a bit slow, and it could've benefited from introducing some of the characters or some of the story's conflicts prior to the saloon's descriptions. However, since it helped establish the setting, it's nothing that's too objectionable.

Regardless, I'm curious about where the story goes from here. I'll be sure to check out any future updates, and I wish you the best of luck on your future projects. :twilightsmile:

Very cute. I'm looking forward to where this will go, and I like all the little continuity nods you've spread throughout. The conversation felt a little stilted at times, but only briefly, and both characters played off of each other well. This will be a fun read.

You know, I don't think I've actually read a homosexual fanfic between two males. I have no idea why, since I'm not adverse to the idea or sexuality in the slightest.

This has caught my interest. I am looking forward to more!

You know, I really, really hate to do this to a story that I'm interested in. Especially when it has only one chapter. However, I do have my own rules to follow, and I'm afraid that you've left me with no choice.

By the power invested in me, myself and I, (since this story hasn't updated in over six months) I hereby declare this story to be dead. May it forever rest in peace.

P.S. Welcome to the Graveyard.

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